Okay, well frankly the game right off the bat reminded me of Music Catch, a game recently submitted by another user. His submission can be found here:
http://armorgames.com/play/1623/music-catch
Aspects of the game:
GFX:
*Crisp clean and quite easy to differentiate what was going on. I liked that the neon circles were not ornate and just plain gloss colors. The fact that you added shading and glow gave the eye something to focus on.
Sound:
*Well, correct me if i am wrong but was there indeed any? I understand this is a game in progress, so im not going to weigh so heavily on this aspect. I do recommend some fast paced techno 'esque' style. Just drop a visit over at newgrounds portal site and download a few remixes. =D
Menu:
Amazing idea! I am amazed! Never have i seen a game that, well, doesn't really need the mouse for the menu! Took me quite a while to figure out how to move around though. I recommend adding some sort of indication that that is indeed the cursor. It also seemed a little small. An increase in size would do wonders.
Game it's self:
Really quite simply and nice. The game would have been a dud without the upgrades. My only beef with the game is this: Is there an end? I have played all they way to 10,000 points and assumed i reached the maximum galaxy size. A game that goes on forever and ever is in my opinion, a downer. It tends to bore the audience. gamers are looking for twists and turns, they need to have the thrill that keeps them hooked. The members on armor games are more of a younger crowd. Restless and rowdy, the expect a lot from games.
My other idea is a multi stage background. If you hadn't noticed black isn't the new red, and red isn't the new pink. Entertain my iris! I suggest that every so often the background change to:
A) Give the gamer more to look at
B) Somewhat trick the gamer into losing their 'galaxy' size! muahahhah
If you really want to get this game accepted, e-mail the company and ask to use the logo as a background. They may even sponsor your game if you agree to make it specifically for armor games.
-Arax >_>