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Great chapter. Lacks a bit of enthusiam, but an amazing read.
Jokes aside:
you say that cause everyone else says that...wow...irony. But then again im kinda thinking devin is a little kid...
you try writing 2 full length chapters with a story and that makes sense (shut up it'll all be explainded if anyone actualy listen to anytime I say this).
Can we just go back to taking constructive critisism instead of arguing and write more.
If your not going to continue, or just taking a break, please say so.