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melon0111
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This is the description of it. you can see the full one as it comes out here

http://www.wattpad.com/story/1583509-a-deserved-apocalypse-title-may-be-changed

Colton was an average fast food restaurant worker. Never went to college and spent his money on video games and other electronics.But all of it went to waste when the world did. At first it was in Hawaii and was gone for a while but soon sprouted up again and chewed its way across the united states mainland. So Colton and his best friend Thomas gathered all they had learned from video games, TV shows and comics and set out in a world that got messed up.

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acidrainbr
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wow man, great!

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Colton was an average fast food restaurant worker. Never went to college and spent his money on video games and other electronics.But all of it went to waste when the world did. At first it was in Hawaii and was gone for a while but soon sprouted up again and chewed its way across the united states mainland. So Colton and his best friend Thomas gathered all they had learned from video games, TV shows and comics and set out in a world that got messed up.


No offense, but this sounds like a spin-off of Shawn of the Dead. The movie features two loser friends who are complete screw-offs. They then try to save their friends by showing off the skills they learned through video games. Ironically, Shawn of the Dead was a parody, and spin-offs of parodies generally fail.

Good luck though.
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