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thepyro222
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I killed myself again,
To see if I still breathe,
Myself, whom I arraign,
With anger and fear seethe,

I focus on the rope,
That holds my lying blood,
Though Iâve lost every hope,
I wait the coming flood,

A black, shattered blade frees,
The gallows hang alone,
Every last breath I seize,
To fix this heart of stone.

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ragepower90
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WOW. Amazing. I love the imagery in this, and especially the word plays. It was short though. I wish it was longer.
"The gallows hang alone" very very good twist there.

jkl3848
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It's really dark and depressing. :-/

ChromeDeathRazor
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Just came to AG forums to see this post after playing Slender.

*Goes to room and get my pink stuffed dolphin*

Great poem, my friend....

Balloon__Girl
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Wow it is pretty depressing, but I agree with ragepower, definitely invokes some powerful imagery.

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OMG its awesome Sadly i cant ever do something close to that, because right now i cant understand half of the words..

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