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Posted Jul 22, '12 at 12:40am

thepyro222

thepyro222

1,986 posts

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I killed myself again,
To see if I still breathe,
Myself, whom I arraign,
With anger and fear seethe,

I focus on the rope,
That holds my lying blood,
Though I’ve lost every hope,
I wait the coming flood,

A black, shattered blade frees,
The gallows hang alone,
Every last breath I seize,
To fix this heart of stone.

 

Posted Sep 5, '12 at 2:02pm

ragepower90

ragepower90

5 posts

WOW. Amazing. I love the imagery in this, and especially the word plays. It was short though. I wish it was longer.
"The gallows hang alone" very very good twist there.

 

Posted Sep 6, '12 at 3:06pm

jkl3848

jkl3848

242 posts

It's really dark and depressing. :-/

 

Posted Sep 6, '12 at 4:26pm

ChromeDeathRazor

ChromeDeathRazor

299 posts

Just came to AG forums to see this post after playing Slender.

*Goes to room and get my pink stuffed dolphin*

Great poem, my friend....

 

Posted Oct 27, '12 at 1:58am

Balloon__Girl

Balloon__Girl

194 posts

Wow it is pretty depressing, but I agree with ragepower, definitely invokes some powerful imagery.

 

Posted Oct 27, '12 at 7:08am

xerox

xerox

312 posts

OMG its awesome :D  Sadly i cant ever do something close to that, because right now i cant understand half of the words..

 
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