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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 2:24am

MoonFairy
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Variantia seems to be the lead for the name of the Castle, which is appropriate, if we only have one castle. Diversity~~~~~
And I've never played, but Acmed said Dragons and Land feuds, so I said goodies turn bad and baddies get worse. Feel free to say anything else concerning the plot, nothing is set in stone!
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 11:39am

acmed
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This is the finished map. The country is Obleyn, and the provinces are the runner up names. We have a setting now guys!
Now, onto main characters...
I think there should be 3 or 4 to start with mainly. Each in a different part of the province. They all meet up eventually. I was thinking a low class farmer, a prince, and a warrior. We could add one more. What do you guys think?
And, the war with the dragons. Do you guys want to keep that?
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 12:45pm

BRAAINZz
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I think there should be 3 or 4 to start with mainly. Each in a different part of the province. They all meet up eventually. I was thinking a low class farmer, a prince, and a warrior. We could add one more. What do you guys think?
I like these but I also think we should add one with a bit more flexibility in the character development, say maybe, a messenger? Someone who delivers important messages. Actually, now that I think about it, he would have great use in dragging the other three together, or at least a little guidance.
And, the war with the dragons. Do you guys want to keep that?
Sure.
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 5:25pm

acmed
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a messenger?
I think a messenger would be more of a reccuring role, but yes, that is a good way to bring them together. I believe Chillz is writing the first chapter. Does everyone agree on the characters? If so, LEZ NAME DEM!
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 6:03pm

EnterOrion
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I was thinking a low class farmer, a prince, and a warrior
Too cliche. Nobody ever has criminals in these kinds of stories, hunters are rare, bounty hunters and low level officers, competitive marksmen and jousters, all things we could pick from, and much more. I think we should avoid the cliche as best we can.
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 6:29pm

Salvidian
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I think a messenger would be more of a reccuring role, but yes, that is a good way to bring them together.
The City of Ember tried this for a main character and it kind of fell apart. The book wasn't bad, but you could tell there was a lot more potential. In the beginning they made it so prominent that she become a messenger. It didn't really matter later on; it was inevitable of what was going to happen.
Ah... The stuff I remember from children's books.
Not participating; just a little FYI.
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 6:43pm

ChillzMaster
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Well I'm gonna start writing the first bit. Click the link here to check out mah progress and confirm a few ideas.
I think I have a pretty good foundation to write ^_^
-Chillz
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 6:51pm

EnterOrion
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Well I'm gonna start writing the first bit
Not yet, yo. We still don't have characters. Hold the horses at the gate until everyone says go.
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 7:02pm

ChillzMaster
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Growl. Alright.
Here's what I've compiled:
Start out with who-gives-one (but not in a ****** way) merc fighting belligerents from the Tekko-Joust Ruins (Video Game thread ruins). His entire camp and team is destroyed, so he decides to find more work in the central castle.
-Chillz
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Posted Aug 5, '12 at 8:13pm

acmed
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Start out with who-gives-one (but not in a ****** way) merc fighting belligerents from the Tekko-Joust Ruins (Video Game thread ruins). His entire camp and team is destroyed, so he decides to find more work in the central castle.
Okay. That's a good start to the first chapter. I like it. You can start writing! Go!
Too cliche. Nobody ever has criminals in these kinds of stories, hunters are rare, bounty hunters and low level officers, competitive marksmen and jousters, all things we could pick from, and much more. I think we should avoid the cliche as best we can.
I think we should take it one at a time via chapter, like Chillz just did.
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