Okay I wanna try again alright cause I kinda love minecraft and can't wait to buy it for my Xbox so well I'm as good as Ic4I at writing but it's worth a shot so here we go.

Okay I just started writing and I'm horrible so could you give me some tips please and I've been looking for stuff on the planet mine craft but I' still not super great.

First tip... Learn some basic punctuation... and secondly: Grammar- improve it.
Anyways, I'm not that good at writing. You should ask better writers for tips.