Unbelievably awesome. If I was a publisher, these chapters would be in a book store near you by the time you finished this sentence. Hard to believe you could capture such an image simply through use of a name.

That comment made my heart swell :).  I thank you immensely for it. I put a great deal of thought and detail into my characters on paper before I begin typing.

I am happy you are enjoying it too :) that is the important part.

Chapter 12 is finished, please enjoy everyone.  This one is Ernie's and also a slight introduction to Kegaumongo!!!

As I said, I'm not used to read stories written in English, so I don't know if I'm wrong about this: I miss some commas. Not always, but sometimes I've thought "I'd add a comma here" just to make it easier to read... for me, but maybe this doesn't happen to other people. I don't know, it's just a thought... or maybe I'm just crazy about commas ;)

I'll see about adding more commas!! Lol I shall go back and read over some of my work to see if I missed some.

I sometimes get carried away while writing and forget all about punctuation marks....I apologize if this bothered you.

I hope you like the intro it is not much, but your actual chapters are going to be explosive!!!!

I love this story. And I agree with Salvidian, this deserves to be published.

I love this story. And I agree with Salvidian, this deserves to be published.

Thanks man, I'm glad you enjoy reading it as much as I love writing.  I wish it were possible but I don't know, that would be amazing.

That compliment is second only to that you love it. :)

Chapter 13 is up!!! Killersup it has been too long since you were the star.

Killersup teaming up with skelaton_pilot? nothing to say other then....bad....***.Wicked cool chapter.

Killersup teaming up with skelaton_pilot? nothing to say other then....bad....***.Wicked cool chapter.

Just wait my friend....