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KingOfAthlum
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Hello everyone, I am leaving in a month and a half for BMT. As of now I quit my job and am focusing on training. But along with training I find myself bored out of my mind while waiting. So over the course of this month and a half up until the day before I leave I will be writing a chapter a day to post on DeviantArt and shall put the links here if need be, but I want YOU, the readers to be my characters. Some of you may remember I have done this before and was somewhat successful.

SOOO I need some volunteers to be a part of the story!!!!! Anyone who would like to participate, just leave a comment or pm me If I get enough responses by midnight Eastern Standard Time, I will post the first chapter tomorrow morning!!!

Any questions you may have feel free to voice in the comments or pm's.

Thanks in advance,

Your friendly neighborhood KoA.

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KingOfAthlum
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Chapter two is up!!!! I know it probably seems pretty slow at the start but it picks up immensely in the next chapter, so stay tuned guys.

Skeleton_Pilot
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The first chapter is awesome, very well done! I love having body-snatching powers! =D

The second chapter is showing up as blank for me at the moment... but I look forward to reading it when it reappears ready to read!

KingOfAthlum
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Thank you!! I'm glad you enjoyed it!!! And I thought you might like having that ability. It will come in handy down the road!!!

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Just post a page and a quarter chapter, very short..I know. But I'm hoping this will get the action going. Please enjoy.

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Just finished chapter 1, awesome. Unfortunately I can't access chapter 2 because the mature content filter is on. Is there any way I can read that chapter without signing up for Deviantart?

KingOfAthlum
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I'll edit it and take the content filter off. My bad. Your intro is next Ernie!!!!!

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Chapter 4 is now up!!! Please enjoy!!! Let me know what you think.

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ME IN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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That was beutifull.Much love from Killersup,much love indeed.Best part,you made Killersup a EX-hitman assasin.You're bloody awesome.


Quick question.Killersup couldn't quite understand how old he is in the story?

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That is the best intro anyone has ever written about me. All of those intros are great (but the one about me is the best because it's about me).

KingOfAthlum
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Quick question.Killersup couldn't quite understand how old he is in the story?


You're about forty by human standards. I'm really glad you liked it. Sorry I haven't put a new chapter up my internet has been down the last 30 hours. But there will be two more today if my internet holds out.

That is the best intro anyone has ever written about me. All of those intros are great (but the one about me is the best because it's about me).


I'm glad you liked it. I've worked hard to make sure everyone is unique.

Thanks everyone for the comments. As I've said my internet was down and now seems to be holding so the next chapter will be up today as long as this continues. I hope I haven't inconvenienced anyone.


ME


You're in. I cannot put you in the next chapter. As the storyline fits with a prior one. But check out the link if you want. It will introduce you to everyone that's participating.
KingOfAthlum
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Chapter five is now up!!!

Skeleton_Pilot
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Every chapter is as great as the next! I'm looking forward to when you start integrating the characters. =D

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If you can squeeze me into the story somewhere in the middle that would be great. If you cannot then that is fine too.

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Every chapter is as great as the next! I'm looking forward to when you start integrating the characters. =D


thank you, and it is coming very soon. The next chapter should be up very soon.


If you can squeeze me into the story somewhere in the middle that would be great. If you cannot then that is fine too.


Welcome aboard , it shouldn't be a problem.
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