Please note that if you write your review referring to yourself in the third person, you will have to rewrite it without the third person references to yourself.
REVIEWS:
@Jacen96
P1 L1 You sure you understand what you wrote in the first sentence? While grammatically correct, it doesn't make as much sense semantically.
P1 L6-7 You've got your semi-colons and commas wrong.
P2 L1 "Its" is referring to the trackpad, not the game. I don't see how the trackpad's difficulty can increase.
P2 L2 "It" is still referring to the trackpad, not the game. If the trackpad were more difficult to use, then how would it be easier to master?
P3 L1-2 Why does good and bad mean it can earn anything from an 8 to a 9.5 depending on personal preferences? That sentence doesn't say anything useful and is not needed.
P3 L2-4 That is not a good sentence.
@soccerdude2 You should watch out for your long sentences and check to see if they are grammatically correct.
P1 L3 "I still haven't gotten tired of it, at least from the periods I have been playing it constantly" is like saying "Elephants are not small, at least when they are big."
P1 L5 "and do all of the multiplayer things like that" doesn't fit in grammatically with the rest of sentence.
P4 L2 "usually" has no place here.
P4 L3 "as well" has no place here. "As well" means "also", but reference to Krin's actions only appear in the sentence that also contains "as well". What did he do first such that he could do something else also?
P4 L4 "which although hackers have always ways around these, I applaud these anti-hacking efforts" is not grammatical. Either make it is own sentence separate from "I know...eliminate hackers" or rewrite the whole thing in a way that makes sense grammatically.
P4 L4-5 You can't have "one other problem" with CPUs when there wasn't even a first problem to begin with.
P4 L5 "Preset" doesn't have a hyphen.
P4 L6-7 "This is fine...me easily." is also not grammatical.
P4 L7 Shouldn't really start a sentence with "so", but meh.
P4 L9-11 "Also...deployed" is also not grammatical.
P4 The last sentence doesn't seem to fit with the rest of the paragraph.
P5 Do you have anything substantive to back up your statements or are they just based on a certain style of gameplay that is more often seen?
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