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Posted Nov 29, '12 at 3:12pm

Hectichermit

Hectichermit

1,309 posts

Knight

Did not want to go diggin for my old art thread. So I made a new one wee recent stuff I have done would love critiques...trying to get better and some stuff isn't finished.

My DA if anyone cares to see it

Art Dumpage!!
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/332/d/c/hermit_2012_sketch_by_hectichermit-d5mi3jq.png

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/333/5/9/one_by_hectichermit-d5mkl99.png

Did some different versions of a character

First Version
http://fc02.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/328/5/f/kalko_sketch_by_hectichermit-d5lz77s.png

Second Version

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/331/2/c/kalko_sketch_2_by_hectichermit-d5mdn7s.png

More Stuff :P
http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/323/1/d/goliath_by_hectichermit-d5lh1qn.png

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/317/6/c/character_by_hectichermit-d5kuvia.png

Enjoy and I do take requests on drawing characters :P some of these came from other peoples ideas for characters and I decided to draw them

 

Posted Nov 29, '12 at 4:18pm

Bronze

Bronze

2,454 posts

Try making smooth and varied lines for your outlines and other line work. That's the biggest thing I can think of, because otherwise, they are all good drawings.

 

Posted Nov 29, '12 at 4:26pm

Cenere

Cenere

14,002 posts

Knight

Lessee.

Hermit:
Your lineart is sketchy, which is a bit sad, because it rarely does something good for your art. In this case, a good bold line would most likely enhance idea of strength in the character, and make the tree look like it's stable and robust. The amount of detail to the staff, when everything else, beside the beard and hair, is left blank also does not add to the drawing, while the overall pose and indeed the hair and bread looks quite good.

Cheetah anthro:
Again the wonky lineart, which, in this case, does more than make the character look feeble. Due to the way it's shaded, the lineart should not be very prominent, but with the sketchy quality of it, it's a little offputting.
Anatomy derps, happens.
Shading looks nice, could be more defined considering the light source, but there is nothing wrong with it, as it is, and it looks quite good. So does the design of the character and the clothing.

Bird the first:
Lineart (Is this getting annoying yet?). Nice design, a bit too gooselike a head for my tastes, to be honest, but birds are hard to properly anthropomorph. Clothes might be a little under-structured, but for a general design, it gets the point across.

Bird the second:
I do like this better than the above, mostly due to the change of the head (it did a lot). Shading calls for better structure in the clothing as well. Birds are still hard to anthropomorph, but it looks alright.
The wing/cape thing should probably be corrected, however.

More stuff 1:
Not very clear, but nice looking for a thumbnail. Nice design, the colour scheme is pleasant and it might be an interesting peace if done as a full scale painting in the same colour scheme.

More stuff 2:
Is that an anthro bronze dragon? Or is it cobber... My DnDragons is a bit rusty. Either way, nice structure, nice colours, bit blotchy I guess. With a sunset/sunrise to the left and the colours playing on the character, a full painting of this would be astonishing to look at.

 

Posted Nov 29, '12 at 4:29pm

ChromeDeathRazor

ChromeDeathRazor

385 posts

Those are real awesome stuff you got there bro. What program did you draw this on, or did you draw this by hand? I'm still getting the hang of photoshop though...

Love your drawings.

 

Posted Nov 29, '12 at 6:48pm

Hectichermit

Hectichermit

1,309 posts

Knight

Those are real awesome stuff you got there bro. What program did you draw this on, or did you draw this by hand? I'm still getting the hang of photoshop though...


I use Mypaint and Gimp for most of my drawings. I draw most of them in Mypaint then do some image tweaking in Gimp, I should probably learn more about gimps tools but I tend to try and keep my drawing speed under 3 hours.

Your lineart is sketchy...Again the wonky lineart...Lineart (Is this getting annoying yet?)


Lol yea need to work on that aspect of my drawing skills. I tend to start it then say "!@*#$%@&^#^*" then move to the next aspect of drawing. I guess I hate erasing all the little bumps :)

Is that an anthro bronze dragon? Or is it cobber


Its suppose to be brass but I over did it on the yellow tone I think

Well Onto another I forgot to post< I tried my hand at landscape speed painting Oo this is my second attempt, took bout 2 hours the first one came out horrible due to lack of color selection skills anyways there was no line art in this just globs of color whittled down to shapes with shading and textures

http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/305/1/1/speedpaint02_by_hectichermit-d5jpky2.png
 

Posted Dec 1, '12 at 6:46am

Cenere

Cenere

14,002 posts

Knight

Lol yea need to work on that aspect of my drawing skills. I tend to start it then say "!@*#$%@&^#^*" then move to the next aspect of drawing. I guess I hate erasing all the little bumps :)

Can't remember if you use a tablet, but perhaps you should try out Sai for lineart? It has a stabiliser, which works well with tablets, and if you don't, the vexel function is a nice touch. Then the lineart won't be a problem.
Either that, or get a steadier hand.

Its suppose to be brass but I over did it on the yellow tone I think

Eh, as mentioned, DnDragons be rusty. Still looks nice.

What was the bird character for, btw?

The landscape looks nice, though the light shining down from above is waaay too white for such a scene. Besides that, I don't think the colour selection is all that bad. A bit less opaque and white on the light, and it would have been a fine afternoon in the forest-scene.
 

Posted Dec 2, '12 at 1:26am

Hectichermit

Hectichermit

1,309 posts

Knight

What was the bird character for, btw?


Someone said they should try drawing a one of their DnD characters I inquired as to what it was and it was a Kenku, which is a humanoid Crow I think

...and Something along the lines of this lighting?
http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs70/f/2012/336/5/2/forest_by_hectichermit-d5mw7rb.png
 

Posted Dec 6, '12 at 12:33pm

Cenere

Cenere

14,002 posts

Knight

Well, more like this:
http://img707.imageshack.us/img707/5628/njvbfjdfbd.jpg

Of course, this is a rather crude edit, but I hope you get the idea.
It warms up the scenery a little, the light does not seem quite as in your face as the white light does, and the scene seems more friendly somehow...
A summer evening in the forest, more or less.

It might do well going through a duplicate layer-colour dodge setting run instead, however, so the scene lightens up, but without the lazy light effect. But it's really just a matter of playing around.

 

Posted Dec 6, '12 at 7:52pm

Hectichermit

Hectichermit

1,309 posts

Knight

Yea I see it is probably because of the refernces I was using that the light came out white, for example these

One
two
three

 

Posted Jan 15, '13 at 8:44pm

Hectichermit

Hectichermit

1,309 posts

Knight

http://fc08.deviantart.net/fs71/f/2012/357/1/c/drudge_by_hectichermit-d5ovg0h.png

nother for the grinder...

anyone feel like making a art thread dedicated to drawing the most absurd D&D character concepts. Poor monster characters get no respect :(

 
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