You need to go look at the "How To Create an RPG" post right now because
1. No character sheets at all
2. No customization
3. No available options (what's on the map? where can we go)
4. This looks way, WAY too familiar to the RGP I just started, "Strike or Stealth" 30 minutes ago. It's like you copied the plot, then erased everything important and added new names.
Also, grammar and spelling errors (capitalizing words that don't need to be).
It's extremely rude to make a knock-off of someone else's RPG, and it really, REALLY looks like you did.