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POW-Marine RPG

Posted Dec 28, '12 at 11:00pm

ZombieFreak77

ZombieFreak77

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Year 2012 and you are a Marine. You and 5 others are in a Cell for Ransom to the US Government. You where a Cadet Squad but now you must survive in the real War. You heard the Terrorist talking. You couldn't understand them but you could tell you where in Iraq.

Dinner time comes and your Captures hand you the food. Your Squad Leader takes action and slips his ropes of from the previous hours. Your Leader takes the Knife and cuts all your ropes. You exit the prison cell and find the room empty. You find a map and a Knife for everybody else. There are no other weapons.

 

Posted Dec 28, '12 at 11:09pm

MattEmAngel

MattEmAngel

6,365 posts

You need to go look at the "How To Create an RPG" post right now because
1. No character sheets at all
2. No customization
3. No available options (what's on the map? where can we go)
4. This looks way, WAY too familiar to the RGP I just started, "Strike or Stealth" 30 minutes ago. It's like you copied the plot, then erased everything important and added new names.

Also, grammar and spelling errors (capitalizing words that don't need to be).

It's extremely rude to make a knock-off of someone else's RPG, and it really, REALLY looks like you did.

 
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