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best lyrics for a song contest! (Not whole song/i wont steal)

Posted Jan 5, '13 at 10:40am

kirks011

kirks011

184 posts

Any song writers out there with some lyrics they think could make it big? not asking for a whole song, and dont worry i wont steal them. Just wanna see what the general mood of the songs is these days, so Have Fun and get writing!

 

Posted Jan 11, '13 at 6:10am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

97 posts

I follow my dreams,you'd think there were nightmares the way they scream
I make 'em believe,WOOH! someday someday I'm gonna be the next big thing

 

Posted Jan 11, '13 at 1:59pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

9,437 posts

Fame is nothing but lies,
Brought up by greed,
The public still denies,
What is caused by their need.

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If you can hide the pain
That's crushing your thoughts
If you can close the vein
And start to clot

But it's far to late
You can no longer lie
You must accept your fate
It's time to die

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A forgotten soul,
Now a hollow shell;
Stuck on cruise control,
Going straight to hell.

 

Posted Jan 11, '13 at 10:17pm

kirks011

kirks011

184 posts

wow, i liked the themes of both songs, they seem emotionally real. I love seeing new good lyrics so thanks guys

 

Posted Jan 12, '13 at 1:40am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

9,704 posts

Hey Emp..what genre did you have in mind with those lyrics?

Rap seemed to work quite well with 'em..especially with a brief pause after each line...using that pause as a brief build-up of anticipation that comes rushing in with the next line...and then so on from there

 

Posted Jan 12, '13 at 1:41am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

9,704 posts

And by brief..I mean brief

 

Posted Jan 12, '13 at 1:46am

Lee_Blade

Lee_Blade

97 posts

Okay,will I be famous now?

 

Posted Jan 12, '13 at 2:43am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

9,704 posts

Okay,will I be famous now?


No, especially with that use of plagiarism
 

Posted Jan 12, '13 at 4:26am

chuncster

chuncster

24 posts

My body's asleep, and my mind's awake
In a shockwave of images, I'm about to break
There's a universe that bonds inside my head
But I lost the reality that I once had
Rapid eye movements take me further away
My weary little mind's leading me astray

From daylight to darkness, I'm losing control
Nothing's what it seems, I'm lost in dreams


Mike NRG - Lost In Dreams (Masters Of Ceremony Remix)

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zz4pw5YKEdo#t=01m21s
 

Posted Jan 12, '13 at 12:47pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

9,437 posts

Hey Emp..what genre did you have in mind with those lyrics?

Rap for the 1st one, metal for the 2nd, hard rock for the 3rd.
 
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