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Mini-Mystery 2. Status: Re-Opened

Posted Jan 8, '13 at 8:52pm

MattEmAngel

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With the Mod's blessing (again), I will post my second Mini-Mystery. So far I have written two, and this one is tougher. Plenty of false trails mixed with vital clues. It's not 100% waterproof, so ask if you don't understand a part of the scene.

I will reward guesses with hints or encouragement.

[SOME VIOLENCE/BLOOD. NO PROFANITY OR LEWD CONTENT. SUCK IT UP AND READ IT]

Italian Ice

MATTHEW ANGEL: DETECTIVE
   
    The hotel room was small, but comfortable. The interior was decorated with a standard bed, table, and chair, with a single window facing the rear of the building. A bookshelf had been added to house a few novels and a Bible, none of which had ever been opened. One might have considered it a relatively pleasant place to live, with the small exception of the dead man.
    His name was Giovanni Vespacci, an Italian immigrant who had only arrived in the United States a few weeks earlier. He had come alone from Sicily, and had no immediate family, wife, or children. The only thing on him was a cheap watch, a wallet with 50 euro banknotes in it, an Italian driver’s license and his passport. Only a few changes of clothes were in the single closet in the room. Other than that, everything about him was normal. Except that he was dead.
    “Suicide”, muttered Simon Mendoza, the officer in charge. Standing beside him was freelance detective Matthew Angel. He was inclined to agree. “Any news on the weapon?” he asked the officer, snapping on a latex glove and running a hand over the gun, a well-polished Smith & Wesson .38 revolver. “It doesn’t belong to him, I’m guessing. An Italian immigrant, living in a hotel. He had just enough money to enter America. Owning a gun would be the last thing on his mind”.
    The officer nodded. “We haven’t figured out who it belongs to. It was most likely stolen, but the only fingerprints on it are his. I’ve got a few men asking around the neighborhood across the street. Then again, a gun may have been the first thing he wanted”.
    Angel barely glanced up. “Did he have enemies?”
    Mendoza nodded again. “There are some slight ties to the Italian Mafia, but nothing severe”. He scowled. The crime scene was sickening.
    Angel sighed. He reached over and lifted a magazine from the desk. It was printed in Italian. “Sounds more like a hit than a suicide”.
    “No”, Mendoza objected. “It was definitely suicide. The note confirms it”.
    There was indeed a note. The dead man was slumped over the desk, a single bullet in his right temple. The revolver was hanging loosely in his right hand, and the other hand covered a sheet of paper. Judging from the position of the objects, and the man’s body, Giovanni had simply written the note with an ink pen, which was lying on the desk nearby, lifted the gun to his head and fired. Angel examined it with a small LED flashlight. There were clear prints on the grip and trigger that matched Vespacci’s. The pistol had been loaded with a single bullet. Still wearing the glove, Angel released the cylinder and dropped the shell on the table. It had been recently fired.
    And then he picked up the note.
    The message, printed by hand in English, read “I can no longer live with myself. I have nothing, am nothing, and will never amount to anything. No longer can I bear the burden of my life of crime. I must carry the secrets of my past to the grave. God forgive me!”
    Mendoza smirked. “It certainly makes enough sense, wouldn’t you say?”
    “I’d say that the gun definitely didn’t belong to him”, Angel replied.
    The officer frowned. “You think he had someone else steal it for him? Who would have done that? He didn’t have any friends here in the States”.
    “Exactly”, Angel said. “This man was assassinated. Two things in particular prove it”.
    HOW DID ANGEL KNOW? AND WHAT WERE THE TWO CLUES?

 

Posted Jan 8, '13 at 10:28pm

IAgreeWithYou

IAgreeWithYou

419 posts

Bullet was in his right temple. Gun was in his right hand. A .38 would do much more damage then that if he really did fire it.

Also, the message was in english.

Hin? :)

 

Posted Jan 8, '13 at 11:54pm

fireangle

fireangle

133 posts

I think Iagree is right.

If the gun was in his right hand then the bullet would had been in his left temple meaning that who ever shot him had planted the gun to make it look like a he shot him self to anyone who wasn't  paying attention. His magazine was in Italian suggesting that he doesn't speak english yet let alone write a suicide note in english.

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 3:41am

pangtongshu

pangtongshu

8,676 posts

If the gun was in his right hand then the bullet would had been in his left temple meaning that who ever shot him had planted the gun to make it look like a he shot him self to anyone who wasn't  paying attention.

Usually when detectives/police state that a bullet was in the right temple..they are more of just saying that is where it entered/that is what killed him. I could be wrong..but that was my initial assumption when reading it. Though with that IAgree said..a .38 wouldn't have just left a hole...well...not a small hole...or a medium one..

His magazine was in Italian suggesting that he doesn't speak english yet let alone write a suicide note in english.

That doesn't prove he can't speak English though. He was from Italy..it only makes sense that he would prefer to read something in Italian as that is the language he is accustomed to...as for the note..he is in American. Where the primary language is English..so him writing it in English is a complete possibility

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One thing I think would be a clue would be him still holding on to the gun. When one dies..their muscles completely relax..and with a suicide with gun, this most of the time results in the gun being dropped as there is no more hold on it by the person. Notice during a movie when a person murders someone and takes some time to go through their drop and then places the gun near the person (not in hand)..that is with reason. They are trying to figure out an estimate on the arm's path and how hard it hit the ground..then, using this, try to estimate where the gun would end up

Another thing..he shot himself in his right temple...but fell forward? That is just silly.

Another...and I quote..In a study of genuine suicide notes versus simulated ones, the genuine notes are much more specific about giving directives concerning property distribution and insurance policies and more concerned with the pain and suffering of others. They are more likely to express psychological pain and more likely to use “love” in their texts. The simulated notes give greater details about the motives of suicide, mention the act of suicide itself, and more often use euphemistic phrases for death and suicide

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 7:49pm

soccerdude2

soccerdude2

1,588 posts

I was never very good at getting those Encyclopedia Browns...

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 7:56pm

Tactical_Fish

Tactical_Fish

423 posts

Didn't read any other posts, but if he had shot himself in the right temple, he would not have been slumped over the desk. He would be sagging to the right. Someone shot him with the gun, put it in his hand, and slumped him over the desk. That's one detail anyway.

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 7:56pm

Tactical_Fish

Tactical_Fish

423 posts

He would be sagging to the right.

Sorry for the double post, but he would be sagging to the LEFT.

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 8:39pm

Tactical_Fish

Tactical_Fish

423 posts

Oh! Oh! I know the rest!

There were clear prints on the grip and trigger that matched Vespacci’s.

No prints on the hammer or cylinder? Hmmmmmmm.... If he had shot himself there would be prints there too, not just on the trigger and grip.
Case=closed.

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 9:09pm

fireangle

fireangle

133 posts

Usually when detectives/police state that a bullet was in the right temple..they are more of just saying that is where it entered/that is what killed him. I could be wrong..but that was my initial assumption when reading it.

I'm not sure. You could be right.

 

Posted Jan 9, '13 at 11:19pm

xeano321

xeano321

2,566 posts

Knight

Hmmm... Judging from careful examination of the evidence at hand, this is my deduction as to how the crime took place:

1. The window to the hotel room was facing the rear of the building. It doesn't state that the room was on an upper floor in the hotel, thus meaning the room is on the ground floor, making it relatively easy for one to enter or exit the room.

2. While a precise time is not given as to when the murder took place, I will assume that Vespacci was reading his magazine, thus accounting for the magazine's position on the desk.

3. The magazine was in Italian, while the note was in English. Being an immigrant from Italy, he would undoubtedly not know enough English to write the suicide note.

4. The only money he had available was Euros, not Dollars. He apparently did not have the money to purchase a gun. Being new to the US, I doubt if he had the knowledge, or the information required to steal a gun. (This is an assumption.)

Crime progression:

(The evidence states nothing about the door, and only mentions a window in the rear of the hotel room. I consider this to be a likely entry point in the crime.)

Vespacci (to be acknowledged as victim from this point on) was in his hotel room reading his magazine at the table, while sitting in the chair. While reading, he fell asleep, with the left side of his head on the table, and his right hand side facing up. After he had fallen asleep, the murderer (to be acknowledged as suspect from this point on) entered the room through the window (which is at the rear of the hotel, thus making entry more discreet.) The suspect then loaded the gun with one round, ****ed the hammer, and then murdered the victim. Upon the death of the victim, the suspect then wrote a suicide note, intended to be interpreted as written by the victim. The suspect then placed the note and pen used on the desk to appear as being used by the victim. The suspect then wiped his fingerprints (or he was wearing gloves) off the weapon used, then placed the weapon in the victims hand, making sure to allow victims fingerprints to become visible and apparent on the weapon's handle and trigger. Suspect then left the hotel room by use of the window he had entered.

Have to admit, I worded that rather nicely. =D

 
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