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Emp's Expressions

Posted Feb 4, '13 at 5:35pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,971 posts

I've finally decided to make my own poetry/art/stuff thread.

I currently don't have any poems to share, but enjoy this stick guy who is either growing/shrinking or bouncing off an invisible trampoline:

http://i1147.photobucket.com/albums/o541/Mr12Relic/ShrinkGrow_zpsf5461b79.gif

 

Posted Feb 4, '13 at 5:37pm

Salvidian

Salvidian

3,950 posts

Might need a little smoothing. Otherwise it's unique.

What's with all the AMW threads popping up? And animations?

 

Posted Feb 4, '13 at 5:49pm

light_chaser

light_chaser

659 posts

animations are koolios.

doncha know that, bud...

 

Posted Feb 7, '13 at 2:19am

dragonball05

dragonball05

1,571 posts

What's with all the AMW threads popping up?

It's good, we need more expressed creativity. Plus usually, so long as the people starting the threads continue adding stuff, it has a longer community life, allowing for others to comment multiple times, bringing them back!

And animations?

animations are koolios.

doncha know that, bud...

I guess I don't have a better answer :P

I think I prefer the trampoline idea. I like invisible stuff. I hope to see some 3D sculpture pictures next with this lack of poetry!

 

Posted Mar 4, '13 at 3:01am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,971 posts

Nonet followed by reverse-nonet:

Traversing the rigorous currents,
I briskly sail from shore to sea.
I fear, as a storm draws near,
That I shant ne'er see
My homeland again,
For my ship leaks
And quickly
Starts to
Sink.

Swim!
Surface!
Face the sky,
Escape the tide,
Rise up and emerge!
At least that's what I think,
As the current sweeps me down
To the depths of the briny deep.
Evermore, my bonnie lass shall weap.

 

Posted Apr 30, '13 at 10:06pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,971 posts

Relentless Alliteration:

Regretful rogue reflects:
Quietly quipping,
Mentally mourning,
Gloomily grieving.

Pondering perilous plots:
Angrilly arguing,
Ferociously feuding,
Violently violating.

Darkest dusk descends:
Warily wandering,
Tenderly treading,
Carefully creeping.

Silence still sounds:
Slowly slitting,
Steadily stabbing,
Severely severing.

Woefully weeping,
Wondering why.

 

Posted Apr 30, '13 at 11:07pm

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,971 posts

I wrote this a few years ago

I used to live so peacefully,
Now I am fearful frequently,
Since people tend to envy me:
They view me as a deity,
And they all eye me greedily,
So I am worried ceaselessly.
Why can't they all just let me be?
Humanity: no decency.

 

Posted Jul 10, '13 at 2:42am

EmperorPalpatine

EmperorPalpatine

4,971 posts

Still working on this one

Every time I lied I died inside,
Like suicide from cyanide.
I can't deny that I relied
On pride when you cried
My name. It's a shame
That I'm to blame for the pain,
And it's plain that I'm the bane
Of your life as you live in strife,
While the knife cuts twice
As deep and you weep each night
In fright. See the light
Turn to dust as your lust
For trust is hushed. You must
Obey everyday or decay
And fade away into the fray.

 

Posted Jul 10, '13 at 5:25pm

OperationNilo

OperationNilo

2,044 posts

I'm not good at criticism (actually, I'm terrible at it). So I'll just avoid it altogether and simply say that I liked this last one very much.

 

Posted Jul 10, '13 at 11:40pm

MoonFairy

MoonFairy

3,216 posts

I like this one a lot because of rhyme and it flows. Nice emotion but I feel like instead of focusing on the rhyme, focus on conveying the emotional part more. The ending seemed a bit rushed but overal it was good~

 
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