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My gun by Zachary Loucks (drago9292)

Posted Feb 27, '13 at 9:01pm

drago9292

drago9292

90 posts

My gun by Zachary Loucks
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my gun is a thing
my gun is mine
my gun kills
and that's no lie
if you think
that your safe
il' grab my gun
and shoot your face.

ammo is precious
and short in supply
but it doesnt take much
to take your life
just one shot
and then your done
into hell
where the burning has begun

from a distance
or close up
there is no place
that bullets cant touch
one or two
outcome the same
if you don't like guns
you are lame

my gun is a thing
my gun is mine
my gun kills
and that's no lie
if you think
that your safe
il' grab my gun
and shoot your face

My gun... Forever

 

Posted Feb 28, '13 at 1:49pm

Ferret

Ferret

6,847 posts

Administrator

Do you feel you wrote this artistically, or do you embody these feelings?

 

Posted Mar 1, '13 at 5:03pm

samiel

samiel

415 posts

Uhm......Wow just wow

 

Posted Mar 1, '13 at 5:11pm

samiel

samiel

415 posts

My gun is my best friend
My gun is my only friend
From it's barrel many shall meet their end
If it's a fight you want just tell me when.

I believe that warrants the title of a good response

 

Posted Mar 7, '13 at 2:13pm

TopRank_

TopRank_

265 posts

the cops will come and take your gun
and slap on handcuffs
dont try to run
you shouldnt have killed those people with your gun
thats 25 to life in maximum

they'll take you to prison for shooting that gun
hooray! prison! won't that be fun?
never again will you see the sun
fun to be had for everyone!

you will die alone in a cold dark cell
your only friends are the casings of shells
but don't worry, youll see all your victims in hell!
hell is super fun for the rest of forever
if only you hadn't pulled that trigger
(in canada its "lever)

 

Posted Mar 11, '13 at 12:20am

MattEmAngel

MattEmAngel

6,348 posts

"Your gun is you very best friend,
On it you can always depend.
When you get into fights,
You look down the sights
And bullets come out of the end."

-Ben "Yahtzee" Croshaw

 
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