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Los Angelas, the city where a man can come broke, and be making thousands in the same week. Of course, under this glamour, there's a criminal underworld, and it's your job to work cases to jail some of these. You signed up for the L.A.P.D after being jailed. It takes a criminal, to catch a criminal.

Name: (First and Last)
Age: (Over 20)
Gender:
Bio:
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Partner: (I'll put.)
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills (12 points)
Intimidation: 0 (To Intimidate suspects into revealing info)
Observation: 0 (To be able to spot clues and evidence)
Charisma: 0 (To get the right info from a witness/suspect.)
Intelligence: 0 (To put clues and evidence together.)
Agility: 0 (To be able to catch fleeing suspects.)
Stealth: 0 (To listen in on suspects' conversations without being seen.)
Intuition: 0 (To have correct feelings about if someone's lieing, in doubt, or telling then truth.)

Rules and other info:
1. I will give you a player partner, we can only begin when there are an even number of players.
2. You can join at any time.
3. No telling what happens when you do something.
4. Have fun.

-Spirit

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Honestly, if you don't want to play it, at least say why. Constructive criticism.

-Spirit

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Bump.

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Forgot to mention that this is set in 1947. Look up on wikipedia what types of cars there were back then if you need to.

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Name: Vincenzo "Vince" Ricci
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Bio: Vince was a registered mobster at the age of 16. He was about to be "Made" when the LAPD had ambushed him. It was an extortion job, Vince had another "Associate" with him. The cops came out from all over the **** place. Guys on foot came out of a nearby alley, and police cars came in to cut off their escape route. The plot tells the rest.
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Partner: (I'll put.)
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills
Intimidation: 2 (To Intimidate suspects into revealing info)
Observation: 2 (To be able to spot clues and evidence)
Charisma: 2 (To get the right info from a witness/suspect.)
Intelligence: 2 (To put clues and evidence together.)
Agility: 2 (To be able to catch fleeing suspects.)
Stealth: 2 (To listen in on suspects' conversations without being seen.)
Intuition: 0 (To have correct feelings about if someone's lieing, in doubt, or telling then truth.)

One must be patient when it comes to RPG's friend. Also, Intuition is the same thing as Charisma, isn't it? I mean it's obvious you're trying to make something like LA Noire, but I don't think that's really needed.

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Intuition is when they're talking. Charisma is when you're talking. One more player and I'll start your guys' story.

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Name: Belta Daria
Age: 26
GenderFemale:
Bio:Eversince she was born, her dad was a part of the Italian Mafia. She knew this all along but her mother never did. But when her mother found out about her dad's secret job, she immidiatly divorced him and took Belta to the United States. Belta was clueless as to why they even divorced. Being a part of the Mafia seemed fun. When she turned 16, her mother was stressed out from working too much. She stole money through pickpocketing to robbing banks and selling drugs. But she was immediatly caught one day. The police forced her to work for a the LAPD since she's great at going undercover and stealing infomation without being caught.
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Partner: (I'll put.)
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills
Intimidation: 2
Observation: 1
Charisma: 2
Intelligence: 1
Agility: 2
Stealth: 3
Intuition: 1

As an opinion, I think the plot should be a little longer. You know, go more into depth about the LAPD etc.

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Name: Belta Daria
Age: 26
Gender: Female
Bio: Ever since she was born, her dad was a part of the Italian Mafia. She knew this all along but her mother never did. But when her mother found out about her dad's secret job, she immidiatly divorced him and took Belta to the United States. Belta was clueless as to why they even divorced. Being a part of the Mafia seemed fun. When she turned 16, her mother was stressed out from working too much. She stole money through pickpocketing to robbing banks and selling drugs. But she was immediatly caught one day. The police forced her to work for a the LAPD since she's great at going undercover and stealing infomation without being caught.
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Partner: Vincenzo "Vince" Ricci
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills
Intimidation: 2
Observation: 1
Charisma: 2
Intelligence: 1
Agility: 2
Stealth: 3
Intuition: 1

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Name: Vincenzo "Vince" Ricci
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Bio: Vince was a registered mobster at the age of 16. He was about to be "Made" when the LAPD had ambushed him. It was an extortion job, Vince had another "Associate" with him. The cops came out from all over the **** place. Guys on foot came out of a nearby alley, and police cars came in to cut off their escape route. The plot tells the rest.
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Partner: Belta Daria
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills
Intimidation: 2
Observation: 2
Charisma: 2
Intelligence: 2
Agility: 2
Stealth: 2
Intuition: 0

@Alexandra The LAPD is filled with corrupt and crooked cops.

Both of you walk in and sit at your desks. Vince's is covered with files, and Belta's is mostly empty. The Chief walks in, and says "Alright, we've got two new officers, Belta, and Vince." Most everyone else starts whispering to each other. He walks over to you guys. "Alright, we're not going to give you cases yet. You can go out on patrol, and just answer when something comes up." He tells you. He shows you your car, Unit 1437.

Here's a pic:

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Name: Vincenzo "Vince" Ricci
Age: 21
Gender: Male
Bio: Vince was a registered mobster at the age of 16. He was about to be "Made" when the LAPD had ambushed him. It was an extortion job, Vince had another "Associate" with him. The cops came out from all over the **** place. Guys on foot came out of a nearby alley, and police cars came in to cut off their escape route. The plot tells the rest.
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Partner: Belta Daria
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills
Intimidation: 2
Observation: 2
Charisma: 2
Intelligence: 2
Agility: 2
Stealth: 2
Intuition: 0

Vince shrugs at Belta. "Eh, at least they didn't give us a rusty piece of shi*. Anyways, I'll drive." He says as he slips into the car.

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Come on Alexandra...

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Name: Darko Atlija
Age: 20
Gender : Male
Bio: logy
Partner: ?
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Beginner
XP: 0/100
Health: 82.5/10o
Skills 12
Intimidation: Maximum
Observation : Average
Charisma: Minimum
Intelligence: Maximum
Agility: Minimum
Stealth: Minimum
Intuition: Minimum

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You have to allocate points. Not write "Minimum" and "Average". And DON'T PUT BEGINNER. PUT OFFICER. And no, that's now what a bio is. Write your descriptions for God's sake. And no, that's not your health. NOW, FIX THAT CHARACTER SHEET. I've never seen someone fail so hard at making a character in my entire life. Pathetic.

-Spirit

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Name: Talow Rosine
Age: 21
Gender:M
Bio: Troublesome. My name is Talow, and I am trying to clear my name of a murder I did not commit. As for my job before being framed, it was being a simple thief who stole money. Wasn't really the type to go for confrontations if they could be avoided. as for what happened, well, It was a simple plan to try and rob a store, however, when I got into the office, there was a body and a empty safe there. I tried to escape but got caught by the police who came to investigate the earlier scene. Now I'm working with the police to try to clear my name... as if I have a choice. troublesome...
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Partner: (I'll put.)
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills
Intimidation: 0
Observation: 4
Charisma: 0
Intelligence: 2
Agility: 1
Stealth: 4
Intuition: 3

This work?

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Name: Shadow Michelangelo
Age: 23
Gender: Male
Bio: I was a son of Mob boss, and living life in the fast lane. Cool fast cars, street racing (ran by the mob), and at one point my family had millions. Then in an instant, bang, dad get busted, thrown in jail, and we lost every thing even both my Corvette Stingray and trans am. I add to resort to low level crimes like stealing cars, and convenience store robbery. Next thing I know I'm the one in the slammer, the cops did give me a chance though, said they drop the charges if I join the force and help then take down people like my father, and I said yes.
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Partner: (I'll put.)
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Intimidation: 2
Observation: 1
Charisma: 2
Intelligence: 2
Agility: 3
Stealth: 1
Intuition: 1

I think this is good.

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Bump.

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Name: Talow Rosine
Age: 21
Gender:M
Bio: Troublesome. My name is Talow, and I am trying to clear my name of a murder I did not commit. As for my job before being framed, it was being a simple thief who stole money. Wasn't really the type to go for confrontations if they could be avoided. as for what happened, well, It was a simple plan to try and rob a store, however, when I got into the office, there was a body and a empty safe there. I tried to escape but got caught by the police who came to investigate the earlier scene. Now I'm working with the police to try to clear my name... as if I have a choice. troublesome...
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Partner: Ray Accardo
Desk: Patrol
Rank: Officer
XP: 0/25
Health: 100/100
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Skills
Intimidation: 0
Observation: 4
Charisma: 0
Intelligence: 2
Agility: 1
Stealth: 4
Intuition: 3

"Alright, well, I'm assigning you partner with Ray Accardo. He's a former mobster." The Lieutenant says, pointing to a man with greasy hair, and a dark blue trenchcoat and hat. His tie was dark green, and he was gazing at a gold watch, with an engraving in it. "I told ya Lieutenant, I don't do partners. The last guy was a real shmuck, and even then, he got himself killed right in the middle of a crossfire." The man says, in an Italian accent. "Shut it Accardo, I don't want to hear it." The Lieutenant tells him. "Now, there's a Bank Robbery on 223 Park Street. Get on it." He tells you.

-Spirit

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