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The story that I will post will be incomplete. Please fill in the remainder of the story, and I will choose the best story entry. Here goes!
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I find myself lying on the floor. The previous night's party has left me with a hangover. I struggle to get up from off the floor. Trash is strewn everywhere I look. On the floor, on the table, and on the couch. 'All this mess,' I think to myself, 'is just too much!'
I waddle towards the bathroom, where I peer into the mirror. My hair is messed up, and there is blood all over my face. 'Wait a second,' I say. 'There's blood all over me?'
Frantic, I check myself all over for any possible wounds. There is none. Slightly relieved, I clean myself up. I walk towards my room and change clothes.
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As I pick up the styrofoam cups littered across the floor, I struggle to recollect the previous night's memories. I press my mind to at least, try to remember. For some reason, I can't.
'It was only last night!' I say to myself. 'What happened to me? Was I drunk or something?'
Suddenly, there is a knock on my front door. There are two police officers standing at my doorstep.
"Allan Lindo, you are under arrest for the murder of Zack Pedersky."
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I,lost in my dreams inside the car,soon remember an important memory.
`It has been calculated that you are indeed a sleepwalker.
Please take two pills every six hours or after a warm bath.`
I climb to the barred window,somewhat dizzy,and exclaim,`I was sleepwalking!I murdered my own friend on the second floor in my sleep!Please believe me!!!`
The police officer then turns the car around and pulls over at the hotel.
`Hah!I made you say your secret!I`m no officer,I`m Zack!`
`Aw,man!Here`s the thirty bucks,as promised,my sneaky amigo!`
And that`s how I lost the bet from a month ago.
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