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Armor Characters Adventures

Posted Nov 20, '08 at 10:46am

Ogt2

Ogt2

101 posts

Iron - Knight

Sorry, i've been working alot lately and i don't have much free time to continue, but when i do, i'll start typing, so please be patient.

 

Posted Dec 2, '08 at 3:10pm

Ogt2

Ogt2

101 posts

Iron - Knight

Episode 9:

Fancy Pants' view (1): "Tot then asked me what this growling noise was, but I didn't hear anything. Then all at once, Tot yelled and dissapeared. I was looking for him, but I couldn't find him! Then I heard a door opening, and a huge hallway was behind. I went through the door, and it slammed shut behind me, but this time, i heard the growling noise but it was much louder this time."

Tot's view (1): "I asked Fancy Pants what this growling noise was, but he wouldn't listen to me... Then all at once, something grabbed my leg, and I fell unconcious. When I woke up, I was in a tube, but i couldn't see anything of what was outside. I heard an explosion, and the tube opened. I went out and a metal door opened. So i went through, and there was this person who jumped on me."

Sonny's view (1): "I was used to fight little ghost samurais, but these ZPCI idiots were too annoying. I was walking on the ghostly beach looking for someone to fight with, but one of those ZPCI guys were coming torwards me. He looked different than the others, with a full white suit, maybe it was an upgraded unit, but anyways, i couldn't beat him, and i'll tell you why. The ZPCI unit pointed a gun at me, shot, and I got paralised. I couldn't move on bit, and the ZPCI unit shot another round at me, and I fell unconcious. Next thing i know, i woke up in a hole, bounded with metal walls, but climbing out of it was a piece of cake. I saw some explosives, so i took them, and i opened a door, leading to a hallway. There was only one door in front of me, but it was locked, so i used the explosives to blow the door up, and this strange guy dissapeared, i couldn't see his face. I saw someone locked in a tube, so i opened it up and unlocked the hatch door. I hid and waited for him to come out, so i could jump on him."

Tot's view (2): "I was on the ground, and this guy was holding me, asking how i got here. I told him the truth, and he asked me if i could help him. With no other solution, i just accepted. We opened a door and it brought us to a hallway, and at the other end, there was Fancy Pants. He ran torwards us, yelling something, but i couldn't hear him.
The other guy pushed me aside and got brought by a huge growling boulder, but Fancy Pants took a thick branch and stopped it."

Fancy Pants' view (2): "The boulder stopped, but all at once, the walls opened up and i got pulled in by some force and i dissapeared, but i didn't know where i was heading. I got pulled in a tube maze, and the tubes brought me somewhere. When i woke up, i was on a balancing rock on the tip of a hill, but i moved too much, so the rocks unbalanced and i fell..."

End of Episode 9.

I tried something new, with different point of views, and i hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for watching this.

 

Posted Dec 5, '08 at 12:49pm

Ogt2

Ogt2

101 posts

Iron - Knight

Is this post dead? I'm looking for ideas for Episode 10.

 

Posted Dec 7, '08 at 9:44am

JoShark

JoShark

3 posts

Wood - Serf

Wow, really nice series! I would never of guessed it was this huge, all the Episodes were great, but I realized a few "faults", ("fault" is when for example, in a film, there is a bag of raisins on a table, and next scene it's gone XD) like when Tot has his broken leg in Episode 8, but in Episode 9, is it still broken? Because he can walk normally... Also, where is the map? Well, still looking forward in reading more of these, and Sonny rocks!

 

Posted Dec 7, '08 at 6:00pm

Willsoccer725

Willsoccer725

31 posts

Gold - Serf

I think you should have someone who stumbles into this by accident...

You might want to make this into a flash series and post it on YouTube. I tried to find something that could let you do it for free, but no luck. mybe you should Google it  or something. Might help out the people like me, who just don't have the time to ead it all, and would rather see it in visual form.

I like it so far though!

 

Posted Dec 8, '08 at 6:27am

Ogt2

Ogt2

101 posts

Iron - Knight

Lol, Willsoccer, i have Flash 8 :)

 

Posted Dec 8, '08 at 10:37pm

d_dude

d_dude

156 posts

Gold - Squire

dude this awesome!!! great job!

 
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