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Hi, I'm Ogt2 and on the forums, from now on, i will write (type if you prefer) a series called: The Armor Characters Adventures!
Here is Episode 1: Fancy Shoes:
One day, Fancy Pants found some pretty odd white shoes. He was confused, and in the end, he took them before leaving on another journey to save the day.
Once he got to his wardrobe, he took his fancy black pants and put the shoes on, and POP! The shoes jumped back out, but with a new black color! Fancy Pants thought of what just happened. He then tried to put the shoes on while wearing his green pants, but then POP! The shoes color morphed into a lime green. Fancy Pants then decided to go to the shoes specialist, and once he got there, he asked the specialist if he could explain this mystery. The specialist started explaining that these shoes were magical, and that they were made especially for Fancy Pants. He then showed him another one of those pairs, but that one was out of use, and we never found the owner of them again. The specialist said that if Fancy Pants kept those shoes, his fate will be similar to the one who once wore those shoes. But Fancy Pants wouldn't believe in some rumored story, so he kept the shoes. A few days later, while Fancy Pants put the shoes on, he realized that the shoes didn't POP! right out, and all at once, he became blurry and disappeared! When he woke up, he appeared in a dark room, without the shoes. He then wondered if that rumor wasn't true after all.
End of episode 1.
Sorry if this wasted a few minutes of your life, but for those who support me, give me feedback and suggestions.
The hint for the next character: Opposite.
Once again, sorry if you hated it.
Episode 2 coming soon!
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Roadripper: Hey thanks a lot! If you have suggestions just tell me or send me an e-mail.
juan999999: Yeah, it could, but I'm not really looking forward to that.
If anyone else has any suggestions, just post a comment on my account. Thanks in advance.
Could you not write some more, and bump the thread with that, instead of spamming? Just a good piece of advice.
I was thinking the exact same thing... Since this was a continuing story, why didn't you just write more to it? That would have worked as a much better bump...
Sorry, i've been working alot lately and i don't have much free time to continue, but when i do, i'll start typing, so please be patient.
Episode 9:
Fancy Pants' view (1): "Tot then asked me what this growling noise was, but I didn't hear anything. Then all at once, Tot yelled and dissapeared. I was looking for him, but I couldn't find him! Then I heard a door opening, and a huge hallway was behind. I went through the door, and it slammed shut behind me, but this time, i heard the growling noise but it was much louder this time."
Tot's view (1): "I asked Fancy Pants what this growling noise was, but he wouldn't listen to me... Then all at once, something grabbed my leg, and I fell unconcious. When I woke up, I was in a tube, but i couldn't see anything of what was outside. I heard an explosion, and the tube opened. I went out and a metal door opened. So i went through, and there was this person who jumped on me."
Sonny's view (1): "I was used to fight little ghost samurais, but these ZPCI idiots were too annoying. I was walking on the ghostly beach looking for someone to fight with, but one of those ZPCI guys were coming torwards me. He looked different than the others, with a full white suit, maybe it was an upgraded unit, but anyways, i couldn't beat him, and i'll tell you why. The ZPCI unit pointed a gun at me, shot, and I got paralised. I couldn't move on bit, and the ZPCI unit shot another round at me, and I fell unconcious. Next thing i know, i woke up in a hole, bounded with metal walls, but climbing out of it was a piece of cake. I saw some explosives, so i took them, and i opened a door, leading to a hallway. There was only one door in front of me, but it was locked, so i used the explosives to blow the door up, and this strange guy dissapeared, i couldn't see his face. I saw someone locked in a tube, so i opened it up and unlocked the hatch door. I hid and waited for him to come out, so i could jump on him."
Tot's view (2): "I was on the ground, and this guy was holding me, asking how i got here. I told him the truth, and he asked me if i could help him. With no other solution, i just accepted. We opened a door and it brought us to a hallway, and at the other end, there was Fancy Pants. He ran torwards us, yelling something, but i couldn't hear him.
The other guy pushed me aside and got brought by a huge growling boulder, but Fancy Pants took a thick branch and stopped it."
Fancy Pants' view (2): "The boulder stopped, but all at once, the walls opened up and i got pulled in by some force and i dissapeared, but i didn't know where i was heading. I got pulled in a tube maze, and the tubes brought me somewhere. When i woke up, i was on a balancing rock on the tip of a hill, but i moved too much, so the rocks unbalanced and i fell..."
End of Episode 9.
I tried something new, with different point of views, and i hope you enjoyed it. Thanks for watching this.
Wow, really nice series! I would never of guessed it was this huge, all the Episodes were great, but I realized a few "faults", ("fault" is when for example, in a film, there is a bag of raisins on a table, and next scene it's gone XD) like when Tot has his broken leg in Episode 8, but in Episode 9, is it still broken? Because he can walk normally... Also, where is the map? Well, still looking forward in reading more of these, and Sonny rocks!
I think you should have someone who stumbles into this by accident...
You might want to make this into a flash series and post it on YouTube. I tried to find something that could let you do it for free, but no luck. mybe you should Google it or something. Might help out the people like me, who just don't have the time to ead it all, and would rather see it in visual form.
I like it so far though!
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