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Guest_Pegasus1234
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I love writing poetry, and since other members have been doing this, I have decided to join

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Guest_Pegasus1234
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they are hard to make
but haiku's are very nice
it's a risk I'll take

Pegasus haiku
you would never expect it
but it works well

some words can mean sounds
they're onomatopoeia
a phenomena

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I wasn't Thanks for noticing!!

Pegasus haiku
you would never expect it
but it can work well

This should be fixed.

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Thank you very much!
I'm glad to hear you liked them!
more are coming soon

Saphire24
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Very clever!

Riptizoid101
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get rekt by haiku
my m.l.g skeelz 2 pro
420 no scope

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Very clever!

Thanks

btw, I love your poems.

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Haiku... https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HQoRXhS7vlU ... This short movie is everything I feel now...

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I tend to repeat myself, and rant, and use cliques in my poetry, so I think that that opinion may change, but thanks GP.

To express ones self
in 27 syllables
is very dific.

This^ is my favorite haiku! (Since this seams to be a suitable place to contribute this)

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@Riptizoid101 Technically your third stanza has eight syllables: four hundred and twenty no scope. ._.

Actually based on the le mememe, it's 'supposed' to be pronounced "four-twenty" noscope, similar to how one would say "three-sixty (360) no scope", but I understand the confusion. I suppose I should've worded it to make it more clear.

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It's an invasion
Haikus flood the narrow streets
All over my thread

I'm joking of course ^^
my poems go in my first post
I don't mind at all

Saphire24
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Thanks
I know, I didn't wright it properly. Sorry.

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New Poem

Saphire24
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Is it really like that for you?

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Is it really like that for you?

No, I just got inspired by the failed Count to 100 attempt where I was pretending to be pessimistic, I dislike making sad poems

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New Poem

idk if this counts, but I wrote a song, and since I can't sing to save my life, I guess I'll just put the words here

I actually have a few songs that I've written, and although my voice is awful, I think some of the songs have a nice meaning

If I were to make it a song, there would be some minor differences in there like there would be 'cause and ain't just because it saves a syllable and would help the song flow better

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