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ChromeDeathRazor
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Hey guys, I'm planning to submit my first creepypasta on their website, but I don't know if its up to their standard... Would really appreciate some feedback from you guys!

Without further ado, here's the story...

It's in google docs tho...

[url=https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByaZGEwiZSfCaXNPc19ucEpfaXc/view?usp=sharing]

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ChromeDeathRazor
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Farmer

Whoops, link didn't work... let me try again

ChromeDeathRazor
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Here

ChromeDeathRazor
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Dammit... link won't work... Here's the text for the link anyways...

https://drive.google.com/file/d/0ByaZGEwiZSfCMjdYVi05WlI3cW8/view?usp=sharing

Koshionos
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I got ya, bro.
Chrome's Creepy Pasta

When you click [Link] you can type text to what you want it hyperlinked to, then click [/Link] to complete the code

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