Forums → Game Walkthroughs → Made a few walkthroughs some critique of my recordings would be nice!

So just got an idea of making walkthroughs of flashgames and html5 made 2 videos so some critique of what I could do better would be nice!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=58-TjWaLiMI <----- Greetings from Potato Island Full Walkthrough

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Sj_mRXBrdSU <---- Home Story: 1971