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Squidlidink's poems that he wrote.

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 12:03am

thepyro222

thepyro222

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I write also, The overall poem is pretty good. look for "the demon poet." that's all my work

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 12:51am

squidlidink

squidlidink

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poems.... and pyro thanks! I saw your poem. It was neat!

 

Posted Jul 14, '08 at 7:01am

Strop

Strop

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You're starting to write by showing not telling, but the treatment isn't entirely consistent just yet- lapsing into more prosaic, explanatory segments rather than exploratory images. But it's getting somewhere- just sometimes, less really is more.

This poetry leans towards the modernist movement of the early to mid 20th century...check out T.S. Eliot in particular, for example, The Love Song of J. Albert Prufrock.

 

Posted Jul 15, '08 at 2:38pm

squidlidink

squidlidink

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Thanks Strop~ That was nice of you to say :8^D

 
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