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thepyro222
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Shepherd

This World
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In this world I am alone,
No one to turn to,
Nothing to call my own,
I will tell you true,

Iâve been beaten into a shell,
A ghost of my former being,
Iâm trapped like a beast in a cell,
Darkness is all that I am seeing,

My heart has been broken,
A thousand times,
My soul has been taken,
For untold crimes,

I stand alone,
Shrouded in night,
Broken are my bones,
But I live in spite,

In this world I am alone,
No one to turn to,
Nothing to call my own,
I have told you true.

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jeffwak906
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Peasant

OK then, nice poem....

Klaushouse
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Peasant

How about making one thread and putting all your work in it? I presume the other demon ones are yours.

ialwayswin
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Scribe

yeah I agree with klaushouse. Anyways good job

jeffwak906
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Peasant

I'm not even sure this was his work. The unknown symbols may suggest he just copy and pasted it from another website...

thepyro222
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Shepherd

really? you think I'm cheap? I do all my own work and I don't take from anyone. And I just wrote this one today.

ubertuna
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Farmer

I googled a section of it and nothing came up. This is all his work. The symbols are also characteristic of copy/pasting from a word document. you have got some "mad skillz," if you don't mind me saying

Klaushouse
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Peasant

Have you checked TurnItIn.com? I will detect and search thousands upon thousands of documents and tell you the % of plagiarism.

ubertuna
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Farmer

Google works just fine. I have to pay to use turnitin.

skater_kid_who_pwns
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Jester

All your poems are pretty sweet. Nice work. (:

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