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The Demon poet presents.... This World

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 1:02pm

thepyro222

thepyro222

1,978 posts

This World
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In this world I am alone,
No one to turn to,
Nothing to call my own,
I will tell you true,

I’ve been beaten into a shell,
A ghost of my former being,
I’m trapped like a beast in a cell,
Darkness is all that I am seeing,

My heart has been broken,
A thousand times,
My soul has been taken,
For untold crimes,

I stand alone,
Shrouded in night,
Broken are my bones,
But I live in spite,

In this world I am alone,
No one to turn to,
Nothing to call my own,
I have told you true.

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 1:11pm

jeffwak906

jeffwak906

233 posts

OK then, nice poem....

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 1:29pm

Klaushouse

Klaushouse

2,853 posts

How about making one thread and putting all your work in it? I presume the other demon ones are yours.

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 3:26pm

ialwayswin

ialwayswin

736 posts

yeah I agree with klaushouse. Anyways good job

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 3:39pm

jeffwak906

jeffwak906

233 posts

I'm not even sure this was his work.  The unknown symbols may suggest he just copy and pasted it from another website...

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 6:53pm

thepyro222

thepyro222

1,978 posts

really? you think I'm cheap? I do all my own work and I don't take from anyone. And I just wrote this one today.

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 6:58pm

ubertuna

ubertuna

2,092 posts

Knight

I googled a section of it and nothing came up.  This is all his work.  The symbols are also characteristic of copy/pasting from a word document.  you have got some "mad skillz," if you don't mind me saying :)

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 7:02pm

Klaushouse

Klaushouse

2,853 posts

Have you checked TurnItIn.com? I will detect and search thousands upon thousands of documents and tell you the % of plagiarism.

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 7:26pm

ubertuna

ubertuna

2,092 posts

Knight

Google works just fine.  I have to pay to use turnitin.

 

Posted Jul 13, '08 at 7:33pm

skater_kid_who_pwns

skater_kid_who_pwns

4,313 posts

All your poems are pretty sweet. Nice work. (:

 
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