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The Man With No Life.

Posted Aug 4, '08 at 7:32pm

flappybob999

flappybob999

860 posts

finish the story


No demands! :P Be pateint. I'll finish it when it's finished.
 

Posted Aug 5, '08 at 10:17am

flappybob999

flappybob999

860 posts

I have 5 too many plans today... I'll continue the story tomorrow. :)

 

Posted Aug 7, '08 at 4:37pm

Danstanta

Danstanta

1,786 posts

Short, but AWESOME! :PPPPP

 

Posted Aug 8, '08 at 1:49pm

flappybob999

flappybob999

860 posts

Drivthar stood in front of the old shaken Alaapokian, rooted to the ground. Thoughts entered Drivthar's mind: "He's joking, it's all a prank. All a prank! You can't have powers! You're silly old Drivthar!" Just then, the shivering sensation came over Drivthar once more, wrapping him in a sense of heatness... Heatness? The weather was freezing, the harshest winter seen by Alaapokians in a few years was raging all around Alaapokees, so why was Drivthar feeling hot? Christrew continued:
"You feel warm, yes? I thought so. Drivthar, your mother and father kept you secret for a few years... Because you are a Streptul. Streptul's are fire creatures, only emerging their powers in months after birth There is a way to shut down Streptuls' powers, and your parents did this to you. Unfortunaltely, it is only temporary. Now, once you learn to control your powers, you can choose your side. Use your inimaginable powers for the greater good of Alaapokees... Or become a monstrous villan."

"Your Choice Drivthar... Your Choice.

 

Posted Aug 9, '08 at 5:44am

DarkShifter

DarkShifter

49 posts

Nice! Though Unfortunately was spelt wrong and you can't really use "heatness" as it isn't really a word. Still,I look forward to see more!

 

Posted Aug 9, '08 at 10:25am

flappybob999

flappybob999

860 posts

Nice! Though Unfortunately was spelt wrong and you can't really use "heatness" as it isn't really a word. Still,I look forward to see more!


I was so excited about writing about Drivthar's powers, yes, I did make many mistakes.
 

Posted Aug 18, '08 at 9:42pm

kevin44

kevin44

1,905 posts

Is the story over, it's been a week...
Nice installment, very suspensful. Keep writing!

 

Posted Aug 18, '08 at 9:45pm

Arax_Nisanu

Arax_Nisanu

1,376 posts

STOP TALKING ABOUT MY LIFE!!?!?!?!?!?!

 
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