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Collas yo

Posted Jul 24, '08 at 9:29pm

Drace

Drace

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Another poem I put up in 5 minutes. Please do not notice that I used the word cc..cu...cuh...cuhhhh...cute. GOD I SAID IT!!

Yellow, red, black white, blue.
Scratch off red,
and white too.
Yellow, too bright,
black, too dark
thats off too.
Blue, its just perfect.
No, not for you?
I have eyes, I can see.
Every other color so not ravishing, blue, just so cute.
Other colors did not go out of books by me.
Those must be the idiots, the ones you seek,
find them,
kill them,
whatever you'd like,
I wasn't the one to destroy a color I disliked.

 

Posted Jul 24, '08 at 9:30pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

19,843 posts

The last part didn't make sense, the first part with the colours went very fluently. Well done. I sound like a music teacher.

 

Posted Jul 24, '08 at 9:31pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

19,843 posts

Also, a very random title...

 
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