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Posted Jul 31, '08 at 2:53am

crimsonblade55

crimsonblade55

5,718 posts

I still don't get what the piece of toast is all about.

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 2:54am

RaptorExx

RaptorExx

2,330 posts

It's an important of the song, just go with it...

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 3:49am

crazynaitor

crazynaitor

2,959 posts

8/10 but the piece of toast was hilarious it was a pretty good song!

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 11:01am

hitmanvp95

hitmanvp95

1,139 posts

it's ok!!!

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 12:23pm

dragonwarior

dragonwarior

11 posts

its pretty good 8/10

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 12:26pm

kevin44

kevin44

1,905 posts

7.5/10. The piece of toast part had me laughing.

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 12:32pm

kiddslayer12

kiddslayer12

74 posts

yeah there is no rythm/beat to go to, or a common tune, or song

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 1:04pm

Rockingkid45

Rockingkid45

35 posts

I Dont think that the lyrics are vary good but if you were to put some interesting pitches and rythums it could be vary interesting!

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 1:15pm

thepyro222

thepyro222

2,187 posts

5/10 I don;t like the piece of toast line. You have really good symbolism, but then the toast thing ruins it.

 

Posted Jul 31, '08 at 9:53pm

thoadthetoad

thoadthetoad

5,814 posts

good execpt for the piece of toast thing.

 
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