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Posted Jul 31, '08 at 2:54am
RaptorExx
2,231 posts
It's an important of the song, just go with it...
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 3:49am
crazynaitor
2,536 posts
8/10 but the piece of toast was hilarious it was a pretty good song!
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 11:01am
hitmanvp95
1,119 posts
it's ok!!!
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 12:23pm
dragonwarior
10 posts
its pretty good 8/10
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 12:26pm
kevin44
1,770 posts
7.5/10. The piece of toast part had me laughing.
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 12:32pm
kiddslayer12
74 posts
yeah there is no rythm/beat to go to, or a common tune, or song
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 1:04pm
Rockingkid45
35 posts
I Dont think that the lyrics are vary good but if you were to put some interesting pitches and rythums it could be vary interesting!
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 1:15pm
thepyro222
1,922 posts
5/10 I don;t like the piece of toast line. You have really good symbolism, but then the toast thing ruins it.
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 9:53pm
thoadthetoad
5,435 posts
good execpt for the piece of toast thing.
Posted Jul 31, '08 at 10:00pm
Stormchaser
283 posts
It seems like a ok song. The piece of toast thing wasn't that great. 7/10
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