hey guys i wrote a new song and i just wanted to know if its good.so please read and rate.
Sometimes
Some things i cannot just explain. They make me wanna complain. To everything,for everything. Somehow i try to make it up. But then it all screws up again. Everytime,all the time.
And i wish you could understand. But no!You canât!
(chorus) Sometimes i think youâre sick of me. Sometimes i feel like falling from everything. Just like iâm a piece of toast(a piece of toast). And sometimes i think youre bored with me. Sometimes i think that you canât feel. Just like iâm a piece of toast(a piece of toast).
This fact can make me wanna cry. I feel like i could just die. Just right now,right now. But then i think it is a lie. So now to calm down i try. Itâs so hard,very hard!
And i wish you could understand. But no!You canât!
(chorus) Sometimes i think youâre sick of me. Sometimes i feel like falling from everything. Just like iâm a piece of toast(a piece of toast). And sometimes i think youre bored with me. Sometimes i think that you canât feel. Just like iâm a piece of toast(a piece of toast).
Sometimes i wanna scream(wanna scream)! I just wanna leave!
(chorus)x2 Sometimes i think youâre sick of me. Sometimes i feel like falling from everything. Just like iâm a piece of toast(a piece of toast). And sometimes i think youre bored with me. Sometimes i think that you canât feel. Just like iâm a piece of toast(a piece of toast).
Just like iâm a piece of toast.
It is my first song and i wrote it at 1 oâ clock in the morning yesterday so rate fairly!