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Every one i made this song i hope you like it
its called "Behind Bars"
I am behind bars for somthing i didnt do. i feel depressed i was framed man no one belevies me
Its just another day Behind Bars
just anotha day
what can say
from september to may
a bunch of years.... behind bars
I am goige to be here til i die
dats no lie
it makes me want to cry
i fell like i am goige to die
the worlds hates me why
i am just sitting here with a sigh
with a bunch of scars
i am inoccent dont you see
Im doing time
i didnt do no crime
im sitting in my sell hearinf the rain
and i am fealing pain
it was a frame
i didt hurt any one
dont you belive me
It could use a spell check, but I like it.One thing I found about it though is that it feels kinda short.
teh behind bars part is kinda TOO pepitive for one at a time but overall it was good but short
i meant repitive not pepitive
repetative? or is that actually pepitive?
Anyways, I sorta got a happy musical background, like a Mr. Rogers Neighborhood, very similar actually, when reading the song...how weird.
Although I know it's not supposed to be like that, unless it was, but it's a good song, the 'behind bars' is a little repatative, my Mr. Rogers Version would've been good with 3 or 4(Chorus: Line 5-7) so it kinda messed it up a little in the beginning, unless that was a fade away type thing, then I think it would work. So yeah, good one there.
It is like too repitive but I give it 7/10
Are you a singer ? You sure sound like one, Great work!
cool!!!!i give it 8/10!!!nice work!!!
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