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Chaze100
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Ok i made this up hope you like it:

"Give the dog your food" Dog

"Did you just talk!!!" Human

" Yes! Now give the dog your food!!! Dog

"No!!! if your lucky you can have my table scraps!!! Human

" Go find a rock crawl under and stay there!!! =P Dog

"fine!!! wait a second you little 4h7s1!!!! Human

"that seemed to shut him up" Human

Now i can return to my dinner!" Human

Klangggg!!!! (fork hitting empty plate)

"Huh!!!! thats impossible!!!" Human

"i knew that that cardboard cutout off me would come in handy 1 day!!!" Dog

".......!!!!!!!!!!.................!.!.!.!.!!!!!!!!!!!!........." Human

THE END!!!

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Stormchaser
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Wow
that would make a good tv commercial

kevin44
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That would make a good tv for commercial for some brand of dog food.

MoNKeY08
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that was completly un needed and since u cant tell wats happenin...(liitle kids cant) if it was visual that would be better.. but wtf! how did u come up with tht
?

Chaze100
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Peasant

i just made it up because i was seriously bored!!!

Timegoesby
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lol, I think it is really funny.

thechosengecko
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all i can say is wow, that was retarted

MoNKeY08
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Nomad

ok.. ur lucky.. cuz.. by me posting this comment.. i get wood knight... yea i guess it was a good story.. i just read it rong =)

kevin44
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Jester

Yea, nice story, it would be a lot better visually though.

choalejo
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choalejo
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Peasant

really fun

KiLLaH1234567
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*applause*

TOXIC
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TOXIC
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random

http://farm4.static.flickr.com/3129/2386295406_7172eddace.jpg

rocketsrule
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rocketsrule
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Nomad

hmm.. I like it

tempo013
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would have been better if it was structured the right way.

dog: da da da
human: blah blah blah
dog: la la la
human: duh duh duh

get my drift? would have made it easier to read. just suggestion though.
funny nonetheless

__Michael__
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Shortest fairytale ever:

Once upon a time, a boy made love to a girl,
the girl got pregnant. He asked the girl,
will you marry me? She said, no!
and the boy live happily ever after!

Xanatu
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Fail.I suggest you keep your day job.

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