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Cholokid
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Shepherd

Its a poem that I wrote. I call it Addiction to the Heavens




Peer pressure known to bring a tear to
the owner of a beer brew
Intoxicated in the mind to
spend every last dime threw
beer cans under every bed though
parents cant defend this
every beer tastes like cat piss
first it will bring bliss
just wait to drop down though
hit the ground with a thud oh
try to turn the cheek now
a thought threw the mind how
friends wonder how now
six feet under the dirt plow
its addiction to the Heavens
know the limit, know you brethren
just don't do it or else they knew it
be above it, its just not fit.

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Danstanta
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Great, nice poets. You surly are a mastermind of poetry.

drakokirby
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Shepherd

Yay! It rhymes. Well, I don't really like poems unless they have something comical like monkeys but this is an exception. descriptions how hell life is for a person.

Cholokid
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Shepherd

thanks

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