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Posted Sep 3, '08 at 9:36am

Esuna2400

Esuna2400

180 posts

Iron - Squire

How about The Wake of the Dead

 

Posted Sep 3, '08 at 9:45am

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

=) not bad but so far have you enjoyed the story?
we shall wait while the story develops.....muahahaha
then we decide the name :D

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 12:42am

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

geee.wat an unpopular thread..

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:37am

Esuna2400

Esuna2400

180 posts

Iron - Squire

love your story man iits cool

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 9:58am

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

ty=)i will update it tommorrow STAY TUNE!!!

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 10:12am

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

esuana can i add u as friend?
so when i update i can inform you

 

Posted Sep 5, '08 at 10:15am

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

---Evir past---
this does not relate to the current progress of the story.
i would love if reader could help me think of a plot.i am currently thinking of having Evir and his uncle residing in the mansion search for a relevant book in the library...

Evir had been the only child of the family.His parents had often regarded him with much love,but he had been treated otherwise by their fellow townfolks.Evir had a pointed ear....nobody in his town had a pointed ear.

for as far as he had known,the only person who had a pointed ear was his uncle,Cery.

Cery was a old,though muscular man.he worked as a sailor before for many years,swearing and spitting,just like any typical old sea dog.Cery and Evir were rather close.only when Cery moved to Elitia to live in a coast for due to his love for the sea

Evir had a very sad childhood.Stone were thrown at him by his peers in school.Having nightmares everyday from the regular chant

"Eviry Eviry,Pointy pointy ears got to be cursed,for all to see."

The pointed ears did gave him something though..he had very keen ears and somehow,he also had a very good agility.

Let us forward to the day he became 16.
Year 1972.
Evir finally joined the manhood today.
But,there was no birthday party,no laughter,no congratulations

A prophet had warned his parents to give him away for another as he will cause their death when he turns 16.

his parents,for all their love did not belive the prophecy.
They would take care of him till their death.

Alas,the day came and the prophect proved true.
his parents were killed when a rhino trampled on them when it escaped from a circus.now,what are the chances of this happenning?convinced he is really cursed, he became withdrawn untill he met Dryain,a boy who had gold shiny hair,charming eyes,rather attractive.

Dryain treated him as his older brother.The irony is,he too had pointed ears.

year 1974.Summary
Dryain moved to the town Cyrial,near the current mansion in the story.

The epidemic striked.

 

Posted Sep 5, '08 at 9:59pm

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

sry about the year ,i got that mixed up,when i say 1970 i mean 1930.hope u get it

 

Posted Oct 15, '08 at 10:28pm

omg224

omg224

2 posts

Iron - Squire

this story rocks.. when u update it again let me know

 

Posted Oct 18, '08 at 12:57am

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

sorry,this thread is kinda dead,maybe when it revives,i will start it all again,try to get some of your friends to read this story(:

 
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