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Details of the story:Evir,a 18 year old male,who fell asleep while doing his work.
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Setting:near the 1930's,in a fictional world,so there's no war going on
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Characters ,to be updated currently :Pepper,a dog,miniature shznauzer,i hope i spelled it right.-same breed as my dog
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Evir looked up from his desk ,still drowsing.
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suprised that he was looking outside of his house,rather than outside his window, he quickly pushed himself away from the table,stood up and gape,his house was in ruins.
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a beam dropped from the ceiling,with a creaking sound just before dropping,
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Evir managed to evade from the beam but it grazed his arm.
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grimacing,he slowing walked out of his house,unsure of what may happen next.
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the strange thing is that he has not found anyone,not even anything that is living,plants,animals,human.
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seemingly eradicated,wiped of the face of Earth.
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TO BE CONTINUED....

NExt chapter-----

He picked up a spade and a revolver on the way,made a shealth for the spade and slide it into place.
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whilst placing the revolver into his pocket,he sense something moving amongst the tall grasses.
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slowly taking out his spade,he placed it over his shoulder,preparing to counter any attack thrown by the object.
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,he spotted it.
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a dog,shivering from hunger.
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he lowered his spade slowly,cautiously
and he took out a wineskin whihc he grabbed while passing by a "house",or something that looked like one.
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he let it drink all the contents.slowly the dog begin to smell Evir's hand,when he was making his way off,the dog followed him along.
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and from then on,Evir had a new companion,Pepper.(it's my dog's name)
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To be continued~
-Next Chapter-
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Continuing their way through the valley,
it was rather uneventful,
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but when they reached the end of it,it was a dead end.
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fraustrated,Evir gave a dismayed cry and kicked the slope of the valley,setting off a rain of rocks and stone down the top of the slope.
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looking for an escape route,he spotted a obscured cave in the corner of the dead end.
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he let the dog make it's way first,before barely making it in.
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Evir managed to slipped inside before the last stone nearly crack his skull
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dark and cold,he remembered having a lighter with him.
lighting the way in the dark cave,
he waved his hand to and fro,to see if there was a exit.
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He then heard a very horrifying scream,
Pepper wimpered.
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frightened,he quickly extinguise the fire and got as low as he could.
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turning at a corner,he saw many shadow of humans,many of whom were missing body parts,moaning in pain,lifeless.
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Chapter 4
Looking forward,he saw a dim light,straining his eyes,he managed to make out a exit.

Quietly and quickly,he made a sprint for it,unknowingly,those things have already picked up his scent and were chasing him.

hearing footsteps behind him,that were definitely not repurcussions,he took a glance back.
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those things does know how to run,and those that were missing legs were actually hopping.
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letting fear make the run for him,he felt breath at his neck,just as he leaped out of the cave,he discovered that there was one the size of a 7 year old kid at his back.
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He shaked and jump hysterically.
it was only a while that he realised that it was already dead,strange enough,those things did not dare step out of the cave,taking the one on his back ,he placed it on the floor.
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making his way out of there quickly,he took a bike that was left lying on the floor with pepper on the basket,he realised that the rest of humanity were turned into those things and there was a fact that had protected him,they were scared of daylight.
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Evir then cycled as fast as he every had done to a town he had known,called Elitia,a small one that housed over 200 people.
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now that he know that those things were numerous,he searched the town for weaponry ,unknown to him,there was one of them in the basement of a mansion.....

Next chapter,
He stumbled on something,looking back,he found out that it was a bone,a pelvis.
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Bewilded by shock,he ran,
pepper barely catching up.
with no destination,he wished all these to end.
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rain started to pound on him,making him wake up to his senses.
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it was then that he realised that it was night already.
looking around in the distance,he found that the only shelter was a tree house.
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he climbed up the tree house and very fortunately,there was food.
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he slept peacefully,until he heard scraping sounds made at the door of the tree house.
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pepper was barking furiously at the door,
with great caution,.
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then the door opened.
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a man appeared.

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shermzx
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esuana can i add u as friend?
so when i update i can inform you

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---Evir past---
this does not relate to the current progress of the story.
i would love if reader could help me think of a plot.i am currently thinking of having Evir and his uncle residing in the mansion search for a relevant book in the library...

Evir had been the only child of the family.His parents had often regarded him with much love,but he had been treated otherwise by their fellow townfolks.Evir had a pointed ear....nobody in his town had a pointed ear.

for as far as he had known,the only person who had a pointed ear was his uncle,Cery.

Cery was a old,though muscular man.he worked as a sailor before for many years,swearing and spitting,just like any typical old sea dog.Cery and Evir were rather close.only when Cery moved to Elitia to live in a coast for due to his love for the sea

Evir had a very sad childhood.Stone were thrown at him by his peers in school.Having nightmares everyday from the regular chant

"Eviry Eviry,Pointy pointy ears got to be cursed,for all to see."

The pointed ears did gave him something though..he had very keen ears and somehow,he also had a very good agility.

Let us forward to the day he became 16.
Year 1972.
Evir finally joined the manhood today.
But,there was no birthday party,no laughter,no congratulations

A prophet had warned his parents to give him away for another as he will cause their death when he turns 16.

his parents,for all their love did not belive the prophecy.
They would take care of him till their death.

Alas,the day came and the prophect proved true.
his parents were killed when a rhino trampled on them when it escaped from a circus.now,what are the chances of this happenning?convinced he is really cursed, he became withdrawn untill he met Dryain,a boy who had gold shiny hair,charming eyes,rather attractive.

Dryain treated him as his older brother.The irony is,he too had pointed ears.

year 1974.Summary
Dryain moved to the town Cyrial,near the current mansion in the story.

The epidemic striked.

shermzx
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sry about the year ,i got that mixed up,when i say 1970 i mean 1930.hope u get it

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this story rocks.. when u update it again let me know

shermzx
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sorry,this thread is kinda dead,maybe when it revives,i will start it all again,try to get some of your friends to read this story(:

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well but,since it's my holiday's.maybe i will post some more?

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