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Posted Aug 22, '08 at 3:55pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

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FIRETAIL'S SERIES!
Book #1, Why Cats Don't Bounce on Trampolines

Chapter 1

"One, two, three, four...", a voice meowed.
"Hey, we're trying to get some sleep, you know!", another voice meowed crossly.
It was a normal day in the apprentice's den, and Heatpaw was counting the branches in the apprentices den.
"Sixty-seven, sixty-eight, sixty nine", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup!", Rainpaw growled.
"Sorry...*pause*...seventy, seventy-one, seventy two"
Rainpaw got up, licked himself, and went out of the den.
"Ninety, ninety-one..."
A few minutes later, Rainpaw got back into the den, hoping Heatpaw had got up and went out.
"Seven hundred fourty one..."
"Ugh...", Rainpaw groaned, and went back out.

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 3:58pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

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That would be funny, but people might think of it as bad spelling. More to come! In chapter 1...

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:03pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

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"One, two, three, four...", a voice meowed.
"Hey, we're trying to get some sleep, you know!", another voice meowed crossly.
It was a normal day in the apprentice's den, and Heatpaw was counting the branches in the apprentices den.
"Sixty-seven, sixty-eight, sixty nine", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup!", Rainpaw growled.
"Sorry...*pause*...seventy, seventy-one, seventy two"
Rainpaw got up, licked himself, and went out of the den.
"Ninety, ninety-one..."
A few minutes later, Rainpaw got back into the den, hoping Heatpaw had got up and went out.
"Seven hundred forty one..."
"Ugh...", Rainpaw groaned, and went back out.
Rainpaw picked a mouse off of the fresh-kill pile, then turned around to go to the apprentice's den and eat. Then he remembered that Heatpaw was still there. He abruptly turned around and went to the clearing, where he sat down, chewing on his mice. Everything Heatpaw did annoyed him. Then he saw a shape emerging from the apprentices' den. Finally, some peace and quiet! Rainpaw finished off the mouse and headed into the den. He padded into a nest and almost immediately fell asleep.

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:13pm

Aireo0

Aireo0

13 posts

ha sounds just like Warriors lol whered you get Heatpaw lol
like the idea though=,)

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:13pm

d0m1nated14

d0m1nated14

763 posts

LOL where in the world are you getting this from? Are you making it up?

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:15pm

noneused

noneused

29 posts

cool i cant wait to read on!!!!ur a great poet and writer lol.yeah his making it up i think......

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:17pm

Mummy1

Mummy1

88 posts

AWSWOME

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:18pm

Danstanta

Danstanta

1,786 posts

It's alright

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:22pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

21,765 posts

"One, two, three, four...", a voice meowed.
"Hey, we're trying to get some sleep, you know!", another voice meowed crossly.
It was a normal day in the apprentice's den, and Heatpaw was counting the branches in the apprentices den.
"Sixty-seven, sixty-eight, sixty nine", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup!", Rainpaw growled.
"Sorry...*pause*...seventy, seventy-one, seventy two"
Rainpaw got up, licked himself, and went out of the den.
"Ninety, ninety-one..."
A few minutes later, Rainpaw got back into the den, hoping Heatpaw had got up and went out.
"Seven hundred forty one..."
"Ugh...", Rainpaw groaned, and went back out.
Rainpaw picked a mouse off of the fresh-kill pile, then turned around to go to the apprentice's den and eat. Then he remembered that Heatpaw was still there. He abruptly turned around and went to the clearing, where he sat down, chewing on his mice. Everything Heatpaw did annoyed him. Then he saw a shape emerging from the apprentices' den. Finally, some peace and quiet! Rainpaw finished off the mouse and headed into the den. He padded into a nest and almost immediately fell asleep.

************

A few minutes later he woke to the sound of counting...again.
"Two thousand five hundred and one...", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup already! Why you...hey wait a second. Is there really that many branches in this den?", Rainpaw asked.
"Two thousand five hundred and seven..."
"Never mind", Rainpaw sighed.
Suddenly, Rainpaw heard a voice calling him. It was his mentor, ShortClaw, beckoning him for patrol. ShortClaw was so short that Rainpaw was almost as long, and even taller then him. Together, Rainpaw, ShortClaw, Treepelt, and Ferntail went out of the bramble thicket to patrol the thunderclan/shadowclan border.

 

Posted Aug 22, '08 at 4:40pm

Mummy1

Mummy1

88 posts

stop posting it so many times or I'll report you to carlie.