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FIRETAIL'S SERIES!
Book #1, Why Cats Don't Bounce on Trampolines
Chapter 1
"One, two, three, four...", a voice meowed.
"Hey, we're trying to get some sleep, you know!", another voice meowed crossly.
It was a normal day in the apprentice's den, and Heatpaw was counting the branches in the apprentices den.
"Sixty-seven, sixty-eight, sixty nine", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup!", Rainpaw growled.
"Sorry...*pause*...seventy, seventy-one, seventy two"
Rainpaw got up, licked himself, and went out of the den.
"Ninety, ninety-one..."
A few minutes later, Rainpaw got back into the den, hoping Heatpaw had got up and went out.
"Seven hundred fourty one..."
"Ugh...", Rainpaw groaned, and went back out.
That would be funny, but people might think of it as bad spelling. More to come! In chapter 1...
"One, two, three, four...", a voice meowed.
"Hey, we're trying to get some sleep, you know!", another voice meowed crossly.
It was a normal day in the apprentice's den, and Heatpaw was counting the branches in the apprentices den.
"Sixty-seven, sixty-eight, sixty nine", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup!", Rainpaw growled.
"Sorry...*pause*...seventy, seventy-one, seventy two"
Rainpaw got up, licked himself, and went out of the den.
"Ninety, ninety-one..."
A few minutes later, Rainpaw got back into the den, hoping Heatpaw had got up and went out.
"Seven hundred forty one..."
"Ugh...", Rainpaw groaned, and went back out.
Rainpaw picked a mouse off of the fresh-kill pile, then turned around to go to the apprentice's den and eat. Then he remembered that Heatpaw was still there. He abruptly turned around and went to the clearing, where he sat down, chewing on his mice. Everything Heatpaw did annoyed him. Then he saw a shape emerging from the apprentices' den. Finally, some peace and quiet! Rainpaw finished off the mouse and headed into the den. He padded into a nest and almost immediately fell asleep.
ha sounds just like Warriors lol whered you get Heatpaw lol
like the idea though=,)
LOL where in the world are you getting this from? Are you making it up?
cool i cant wait to read on!!!!ur a great poet and writer lol.yeah his making it up i think......
"One, two, three, four...", a voice meowed.
"Hey, we're trying to get some sleep, you know!", another voice meowed crossly.
It was a normal day in the apprentice's den, and Heatpaw was counting the branches in the apprentices den.
"Sixty-seven, sixty-eight, sixty nine", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup!", Rainpaw growled.
"Sorry...*pause*...seventy, seventy-one, seventy two"
Rainpaw got up, licked himself, and went out of the den.
"Ninety, ninety-one..."
A few minutes later, Rainpaw got back into the den, hoping Heatpaw had got up and went out.
"Seven hundred forty one..."
"Ugh...", Rainpaw groaned, and went back out.
Rainpaw picked a mouse off of the fresh-kill pile, then turned around to go to the apprentice's den and eat. Then he remembered that Heatpaw was still there. He abruptly turned around and went to the clearing, where he sat down, chewing on his mice. Everything Heatpaw did annoyed him. Then he saw a shape emerging from the apprentices' den. Finally, some peace and quiet! Rainpaw finished off the mouse and headed into the den. He padded into a nest and almost immediately fell asleep.
************
A few minutes later he woke to the sound of counting...again.
"Two thousand five hundred and one...", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup already! Why you...hey wait a second. Is there really that many branches in this den?", Rainpaw asked.
"Two thousand five hundred and seven..."
"Never mind", Rainpaw sighed.
Suddenly, Rainpaw heard a voice calling him. It was his mentor, ShortClaw, beckoning him for patrol. ShortClaw was so short that Rainpaw was almost as long, and even taller then him. Together, Rainpaw, ShortClaw, Treepelt, and Ferntail went out of the bramble thicket to patrol the thunderclan/shadowclan border.
what are you talking about mummy? hes adding as he is going and he is keeping the previous so it makes sense. Chill out.
Woah...I though for a moment there I was finished.
Cholokid's right.
"One, two, three, four...", a voice meowed.
"Hey, we're trying to get some sleep, you know!", another voice meowed crossly.
It was a normal day in the apprentice's den, and Heatpaw was counting the branches in the apprentices den.
"Sixty-seven, sixty-eight, sixty nine", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup!", Rainpaw growled.
"Sorry...*pause*...seventy, seventy-one, seventy two"
Rainpaw got up, licked himself, and went out of the den.
"Ninety, ninety-one..."
A few minutes later, Rainpaw got back into the den, hoping Heatpaw had got up and went out.
"Seven hundred forty one..."
"Ugh...", Rainpaw groaned, and went back out.
Rainpaw picked a mouse off of the fresh-kill pile, then turned around to go to the apprentice's den and eat. Then he remembered that Heatpaw was still there. He abruptly turned around and went to the clearing, where he sat down, chewing on his mice. Everything Heatpaw did annoyed him. Then he saw a shape emerging from the apprentices' den. Finally, some peace and quiet! Rainpaw finished off the mouse and headed into the den. He padded into a nest and almost immediately fell asleep.
************
A few minutes later he woke to the sound of counting...again.
"Two thousand five hundred and one...", Heatpaw counted.
"Shuddup already! Why you...hey wait a second. Is there really that many branches in this den?", Rainpaw asked.
"Two thousand five hundred and seven..."
"Never mind", Rainpaw sighed.
Suddenly, Rainpaw heard a voice calling him. It was his mentor, ShortClaw, beckoning him for patrol. ShortClaw was so short that Rainpaw was almost as long, and even taller then him. Together, Rainpaw, ShortClaw, Treepelt, and Ferntail went out of the bramble thicket to patrol the thunderclan/shadowclan border. They sprayed their scent mark on the trees, then went to do windclan. After they checked everything was all right, they headed back to the camp. Along the way, ShortClaw tripped over 3 tree branches, Ferntail bonked her head on a stump, and Rainpaw nearly fell down a ditch. When they got back to the camp, they were a mess.
Dude where did you get this if you write more you could send it in=) it'd be funny to see what the auther of Warrior(cats) would say about it what Clan btw??
Thunderclan. It explained in the last few parts. Make sure you read the whole thing!
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