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Posted Sep 6, '08 at 6:46pm
revolushn
44 posts
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Well, I just had my first play on this today, and I quite like what I came up with so I thought I would post it. Ending probably needs some work, but for a first try, I'd appreciate knowing what you seasoned players think of it :)
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 5:18am
Paliente
10 posts
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Back again :D
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 9:54am
Zega
812 posts
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No offence but I don't think IAlwaysWin's song was good... Sorry. Well, here is mine!
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 11:12am
darkd00m
258 posts
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ok, it's my first time making and finishing a song, hope you like it:
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 2:26pm
crimsonblade55
1,919 posts
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well Zega none of them were perfect,but I was looking at the one with the least amount of flaws in it for the first round,but I am hoping they will all be alot better in the second contest.Although if all of the competitors show more improvements,then I may add rules like no one can win twice in a row.I am now going to check out your songs real quick.Just judge them for yourself.Think about whether these songs are something you would listen to on a daily basis,and that will help you determine whether you think yours is good or not.
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 2:40pm
crimsonblade55
1,919 posts
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OK I'm just going to cover the last three.
Paliente-the last note for the main guitar needs to change,because it feels out of place there at the end.
Zega-There's not too much I can suggest for yours.I am not quite sure how it could be edited.
Darkdoom-Try to make yours less repetitive.
Overall I have seen alot of improvement from the last contest,but there is always room for improvement.
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 7:06pm
Cholokid
569 posts
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Here is my official beastly entry.
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 7:15pm
darkd00m
258 posts
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ok, I'll give it my best shot for improvement.
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 8:48pm
necromancer
552 posts
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A slightly edited version of my previous song. I'm just looking for a little feedback on how to improve it.
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Posted Sep 7, '08 at 8:58pm
infernacron
967 posts
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i call it,"hope for another day by icewolf"
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