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Periodic Poetry Contest - Theme: Touch of Truth (Page 390, due Jan. 28)

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Posted Oct 11, '12 at 6:17am

nichodemus

nichodemus

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And the theme is?

 

Posted Oct 11, '12 at 2:23pm

Parsat

Parsat

1,794 posts

The theme is the haibun. The subject of your piece is up to you; it just has to be a haibun.

 

Posted Oct 14, '12 at 9:27pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,355 posts

The Mightiest Rock

Slowly the river
Will wear down the mightiest
Rock. All yield to it.

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Hang-over induced headaches lead
To the siren song of Tylenol,
And hits of store-bought Adderal.
Walk a tight-rope? I'll do the deed.
In the end I know I'll fall
Since I'm merely human after all.
__________
Hows this for form?

 

Posted Oct 15, '12 at 6:46pm

jezz

jezz

1,414 posts

Hows this for form?

Parsat said the haibun is a short prose (maybe like a Twitter tweet in length) followed by a haiku. I don't know if you're allowed to write a poem instead of prose for it to be a haibun. Which is a shame if not, I really liked the poem! :3

 

Posted Oct 15, '12 at 9:41pm

Maverick4

Maverick4

3,355 posts

Thanks Jess! Though I think its obvious I have no clue what prose is; my idea was wrong. To Wikipedia! Away!

 

Posted Oct 16, '12 at 5:16pm

jezz

jezz

1,414 posts

No problem Mav. By the way prose is just the normal way we write literature. Perhaps change your poem into a paragraph or something :3

 

Posted Oct 17, '12 at 5:15am

The_Gentlemen

The_Gentlemen

45 posts

I see blood spilling. I see brave mens die. I see husbands who will never see their son grow. I see people fleeing. I see the world burn.

I hear the cries. I hear metal against metal. I hear the last breaths of dying mens. I hear the shouts of fearsome warriors. I hear the sounds of Hell on Earth.

I feel the cold grip of my sword. I feel the flesh opening under my blows. I feel the bones cracking. I feel life leaving the corpses of my mens. I feel the blood, all that blood, on my hands.

I feel fear blocking me. I hear the gallop of a black horse. I see War.

His words, his thundering words...

"What a man is now?
"Between rives of an hot blood..."
"What a man is now?"

"Nothing. It's nothing."
"Just a quick flash of my sword."
"Lost. Soon forgotten..."
________________________

Prose first, two haikus later.
It's good?

 

Posted Oct 19, '12 at 6:06pm

nonfatcow

nonfatcow

11 posts

my friend said
he didnt like goodneighbor
we arent friends anymore
hahaha just kidding
hes dead.

 

Posted Oct 23, '12 at 2:23am

Parsat

Parsat

1,794 posts

Mav and Gentleman's poems pass the form, while nonfatcow's does not. The deadline is extended to Saturday, October 27 due to lack of entries. This will be the only extension due to the relative difficulty of this prompt.

 

Posted Oct 28, '12 at 12:02am

Kyouzou

Kyouzou

3,996 posts

I realize this is right on the line, sorry about the delay.

He walks alone, through teeming cities and desolate plains, always searching, always alone.

Searching for answers
End solitude, loneliness
Identity found