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Weekly Poetry Contest - Theme: Sestinas (page 62)

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 7:01pm

mvpguy22

mvpguy22

280 posts

Gold - Knight

infernacron, can you explain your post please? I don't quite understand it. Thanks.

 

Posted Sep 19, '08 at 6:01am

kingryan

kingryan

1,627 posts

Gold - Duke

Umm...lets see what I can make up on the spot...

New Girl

I walk into class,
on an ordinary day,
But everything is different,
Mainly in one way.

She stood there laughing,
with her new friends.
She saw me and smiled,
And for my heart it made amends.

Her smile warmed me up,
And heat-sealed my heart.
My hurts and pains were gone,
Now she had played her part.

And so I spent that day,
Learning about who she was.
Ignoring people's comments,
And all of their faux pas.

And then came a music lesson,
In which she pulled out her flute.
And her music enthralled me,
And now I held her in high repute.

We spent hours playing together,
Her flute and my sax.
Our music filled the whole school,
And warmed people hearts - to the max!

And so the day ended,
And my heart was a buzz.
I couldn't wait for tomorrow,
As anyone in love does.

Do you like it? It is a complete fantasy...

KingRyan

 

Posted Sep 19, '08 at 4:25pm

adrecka_33

adrecka_33

141 posts

Wood - Duchess

its complete fantasy[/i]

Maybe but i liked it cause thats how most people want things to be wether they are or not :)

 

Posted Sep 19, '08 at 4:27pm

mvpguy22

mvpguy22

280 posts

Gold - Knight

KingRyan, I think that that was quite beautiful. It painted a complete picture in my head! Good job!

 

Posted Sep 19, '08 at 9:28pm

Shark7996

Shark7996

320 posts

Iron - Knight

I'm sorry my loyal fans (+1 full-of-myselfiness bonus!), I just didn't get around to it this week.  I'll compensate by making an awesome poem next week...

 

Posted Sep 19, '08 at 10:15pm

CommanderC

CommanderC

122 posts

Wood - Squire

Up before the birds,
Coffee, coffee, coffee!
Sorry, mom.
No time for breakfast.

Hope I finished all my homework.
Stupid math class.
Am I ever going to use
Derivatives in real life?

To be, or not to be...
Are we really doing Shakespeare?
You realize no one understands this.
Can't we just watch the movie?

Oh no. Please not dodge ball!
Bruising, bleading, broken bones.
Did you have to pit us
Against the football team?

Bouncing chicken nuggets!
I really need to start
Packing my own lunch!
Laugh it off with friends.

No ablo espaniol.
I barely speak English!
You realize I'm only taking
This to get into college.

I don't need a Physics lab.
No disrespect to Newton,
But I think everyone knew
That things fall down.

Fifteen minutes. Ten. Five.
Don't start a new topic!
No one's paying attention!
Three, two, one. Freedom!

 

Posted Sep 19, '08 at 11:39pm

kingryan

kingryan

1,627 posts

Gold - Duke

No ablo espaniol.

That should be 'No hablo espan(~)ol'

The (~) refers to the squiggle about the N!

KingRYan

 

Posted Sep 20, '08 at 10:08am

shayneii

shayneii

844 posts

Iron - Duke

Mmm... I can't believe I didn't enter this week =( I was too busy ='(

 

Posted Sep 20, '08 at 11:13am

adrecka_33

adrecka_33

141 posts

Wood - Duchess

I wonder when she is going to post the resaluts i am dieing for them and if i get of the internet i wont beable to get back on :(. Well anyway i think everyone did great, and some poems were extrordanary i think.....

 

Posted Sep 22, '08 at 3:47am

kingryan

kingryan

1,627 posts

Gold - Duke

WHERE IS DRAGONMISTRESS?

I want to know how everyone went, and if I won or not!

KingRyan

 
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