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Weekly Poetry Contest - Theme: Sestinas (page 62)

Posted Sep 16, '08 at 9:50pm

infernacron

infernacron

967 posts

Gold - Lord

school is in session,
class is in session
i daydream about fantasy
I am Rudely corrupted

I sit in detention
with the anger of a thousand souls in hell
i cross my eyes
staring into oblivion

The teacher comes in
makes me do work
and then
I EXPLODE

I go fist to fist with the teacher
I am stopped by my classmates
then i realize i have friends
as i am in trouble

I had my last run,
my last serenade
with life,
as i commit suicide

 

Posted Sep 17, '08 at 6:35pm

mvpguy22

mvpguy22

280 posts

Gold - Knight

All of these are very good, I'm still deciding on mine...don't know what to do quite yet...yikes!

I have to say my favorite so far is Gantic's.

 

Posted Sep 17, '08 at 9:18pm

adrecka_33

adrecka_33

141 posts

Wood - Duchess

I think i liked Gmans the best, its the kind of style i like to read.....

 

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 9:57am

shayneii

shayneii

844 posts

Iron - Duke

These poems are getting good!

I'm still trying to make mine, glarg.  Hopefully I can get it in before the deadline.

 

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 3:46pm

thoadthetoad

thoadthetoad

2,195 posts

Wood - Duke

0_o, infernacron, that's really. . . . . .dark.

 

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 3:54pm

thoadthetoad

thoadthetoad

2,195 posts

Wood - Duke

I know the topic so. . . .I'll give a shot at it ^^

School:

the cesspool of hate
the closet of turmoil
the plane of regret

We go to school with heavy heads,
not for learning, but for dread,
yelled at pushed, to our limits,
you think, Why god? am I in this.

The bullies punch,
the populars sneer,
you eat your lunch,
wait for dusk to come near.

At the end of the day,
You finally play,
for an hour or two,
until homework looms.

Back to bed,
it gives me dread,
back to school,
it's a deadly cesspool.

I made it as I went along, but I normally do that when I write, even when doing essays, and I get A's on those ^-^

 

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 6:09pm

infernacron

infernacron

967 posts

Gold - Lord

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 3:46pm
thoadthetoad

0_o, infernacron, that's really. . . . . .dark.

 

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 6:10pm

infernacron

infernacron

967 posts

Gold - Lord

then if you think think that's dark you don't know half of me!

 

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 6:19pm

thoadthetoad

thoadthetoad

2,195 posts

Wood - Duke

naw, I like dark. I was just saying. . . . .didn't see that coming ^-^

 

Posted Sep 18, '08 at 6:21pm

mvpguy22

mvpguy22

280 posts

Gold - Knight

Alright, time for me to put my thinking cap on.

The Lunch Lady and Her Many Troubles

Wash my hands first!
Get out the dough and roll it out..
Chop chop chop...
Spread on the sauce...
Slice slice...
Add some of these...
And a little of this...
Into the oven! Next dish!
Bubble bubble...
MMMMMMmmmm....that smells delicious!
Sprinkle on some of that over there...
Just a touch of this here...
BEEP BEEP!
Oh, it's ready!
Ahhhh, look at that!
Am I all done for today?
Looks like I better bring out the food....
Here you are children, take a bite!
...
You call this good?
I'm allergic to that...
Can I have more?
This isn't how my mommy makes it...
What is that!?
Gimme some more!
Yuck! This is gross!
I want more milk!
...
I can't take it anymore! I quit!

I know it is a little abstract, but that was what I was aiming for.

 
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