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The Menace-by Firetail_Madness

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:41pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

First of all, I shall tell you that I have no idea why I wrote this. I was just bored, and added random stuff. And remember, this story has barely started! I'm still working.

THE MENACE

Prologue
Slimy Ooze trickled across the hard paved surface. Bubbles popped from the green liquid, and hardened on the floor. Damp, musty smells rose from the walls. In the middle of the mess stood a pimp, tall man who wore glasses. He looked like he was in the mid-30s, his hair was curled, he had a short, stout face, and he looked lean and strong, but he smelled like rotten radishes. He was wearing a worn-out lab coat, and seemed to be studying too odd-shaped glass bottles with a weird fluid in them. After a few minutes, he put the bottle down and clapped his hands, causing a dust cloud to form above him. He coughed, and then picked up two new glass bottles with more fluids in them to study. Finally he mixed some of the fluids and it started to bubble…and shake, as if something inside was struggling. The shaking grew more and more intense, rocking the table with each swaying motion. Above the midst of all this voice, a deep evil laughter could be heard. The scientist shouted, “Soon the world will be mine! Mu-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha-ha!” The rocking intensified even more, until the glass started to crack. Suddenly, it exploded, showering ooze all over the place.  The light bulb above flickered, and went out. Then, everything was black. Everything.

Chapter 1
“Ding, ding, ding!” The bell rang to signal the end of school and the start of summer. The kids got up from their desks, and raced outside. Among the huge throng of kids were 14-year old Jake Albert and his friends Jordan Jackson and Jay Panini. Right after they got out of school grounds, the group of friends headed for Jake’s house for some ice cream and to make plans for the summer.

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:42pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

Dang, what's with those symbols?

Their supposed to be different punctuation like quotation marks, apostrophes etc.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:44pm

mattt15

mattt15

301 posts

Gold - Squire

loli understand the story but not the square stuffs they all mean letters but there like almost the exact same thing so whats the difference OMG that language is weird!!!

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:49pm

fst6

fst6

2,707 posts

Gold - King

Good one!  Better than all mine.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:55pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

Good one!  Better than all mine.

I don't believe that...

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:55pm

fst6

fst6

2,707 posts

Gold - King

Why?  All mine never end and are not very good i nthe begginning...

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:58pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

Well, I'm only starting on chapter 1, I better get to work...

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 7:19pm

gman1000

gman1000

902 posts

Wood - Prince

Could I help with the story? I'm bored.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 7:21pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

What exactly do you mean gman1000?

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 7:23pm

gman1000

gman1000

902 posts

Wood - Prince

I have absolutely no idea. I'm out of my mind today... BALUGA WHALE!

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 7:24pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

BALUGA WHALE!

Beluga whale? Huh? What the heck are you talking about?!

 
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