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mattt15
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Please do not be rude or post a bad comment about this story...I just hope you like it...?

Prologue
A Caveman named Woody lives in the artic regions with some of his friends and his brother because all the rest of his family is dead! His mom and dad died becuase of a avalanche and his sister died because of a mammoth that stepped on her. Now he lives just in a small warm cave with some arts of him and his family and friends. He have been trying to find his other friend named rood. He lost him because of a dangerous blizzard and ten lost him...

Chapter 1 is coming out soon...

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NoNameC68
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The grammer could realy use some work. You could also have been much more descriptive. This is only the prologue but make sure you are descriptive when you write chapter one.

firetail_madness
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Didn't you write this right after you looked at my story?

I hope you don't copy my ideas of a prologue chapters etc.

mattt15
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I didn't copy your idea its that i forgot that you could make storys in the community. XD can't believe it im not joking and i usually put chapters and the prologue some people said that they usually don't understand the story so i just decided to put a prologue.

shermzx
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i didn't know woody_7007 is a caveman...

mattt15
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NOT woody_7007 someone in armorgames!!!
Its just a story OMG!!!

shermzx
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Nomad

i tot he was in the air force...

mattt15
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Nomad

Uhh this is a CAVEMAN

firetail_madness
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Blacksmith

Maybe you should have used a better name...

skater_kid_who_pwns
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lol, woody_7007 is famous now. lol But matt15 just try to ignore them and add more.

slipsoccer
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Haha its still good

mattt15
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Nomad

Oh they have someone named woody_7007 =O sorry!

firetail_madness
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Funny that you just noticed :P

mattt15
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Well woody was the only name that i could think of for a caveman. Also Janky well Woody was better for me.

woody_7007
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Maybe you should have used a better name...


HEY!

i tot he was in the air force...


correct.

Oh they have someone named woody_7007 =O sorry!


Dont worry im flattered.
kielzanie
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hey its woody!!! i cant imagine you as a caveman!!

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