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Woody the hardworking caveman

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 6:53pm

mattt15

mattt15

348 posts

Gold - Squire

Please do not be rude or post a bad comment about this story...I just hope you like it...?

Prologue
A Caveman named Woody lives in the artic regions with some of his friends and his brother because all the rest of his family is dead! His mom and dad died becuase of a avalanche and his sister died because of a mammoth that stepped on her. Now he lives just in a small warm cave with some arts of him and his family and friends. He have been trying to find his other friend named rood. He lost him because of a dangerous blizzard and ten lost him...

Chapter 1 is coming out soon...

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 7:18pm

NoNameC68

NoNameC68

1,129 posts

Wood - Lord

Moderator

The grammer could realy use some work. You could also have been much more descriptive. This is only the prologue but make sure you are descriptive when you write chapter one.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 7:21pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

6,722 posts

Gold - King

Didn't you write this right after you looked at my story?

I hope you don't copy my ideas of a prologue chapters etc.

 

Posted Sep 4, '08 at 8:04pm

mattt15

mattt15

348 posts

Gold - Squire

I didn't copy your idea its that i forgot that you could make storys in the community. XD can't believe it im not joking and i usually put chapters and the prologue some people said that they usually don't understand the story so i just decided to put a prologue.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 11:25am

shermzx

shermzx

571 posts

Wood - Lord

i didn't know woody_7007 is a caveman...

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 11:55am

mattt15

mattt15

348 posts

Gold - Squire

NOT woody_7007 someone in armorgames!!!
Its just a story OMG!!!

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 12:00pm

shermzx

shermzx

571 posts

Wood - Lord

i tot he was in the air force...

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 1:53pm

mattt15

mattt15

348 posts

Gold - Squire

Uhh this is a CAVEMAN

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 1:54pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

6,722 posts

Gold - King

Maybe you should have used a better name...

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 2:04pm

skater_kid_who_pwns

skater_kid_who_pwns

1,542 posts

Wood - Queen

lol, woody_7007 is famous now. lol But matt15 just try to ignore them and add more. :D

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 2:08pm

mattt15

mattt15

348 posts

Gold - Squire

Oh they have someone named woody_7007 =O sorry!

 
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