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Posted Sep 6, '08 at 1:30pm
firetail_madness
6,731 posts
Not a lot, but reading the first few sentences I can point out quite a few.
Posted Sep 6, '08 at 1:29pm
slipsoccer
563 posts
oh this is good!
Posted Sep 6, '08 at 1:56pm
skater_kid_who_pwns
1,547 posts
Well, I will addmit that my spelling is about as good as a 3rd graders. lol
why thank you!
Posted Sep 6, '08 at 1:58pm
See, you just spelled admit wrong.
And you don't use capitals much.
yeah but his stories are cool
Posted Sep 6, '08 at 2:01pm
True, but I think he needs to be more descriptive. In the beginning, he just went right into it.
ha, lol firetail just get over it and enjoy the story...OK?
man I feel like I need to go back to 3rd grade and learn to spell. As for caps, I just dont send my finger down here thats all I just think more of the story not the caps.
yeah c'mon firetail just enjoy the story
Posted Sep 6, '08 at 2:03pm
lol, you sound like my teacher or something...
Posted Sep 6, '08 at 2:05pm
maybe i am your teacher...lol
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