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the dragon hunt. By skater_kid_who_pwns

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 2:07pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

Nah, your just a person who needs to learn 3rd grade spelling! ROFL jk.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 3:37pm

fst6

fst6

2,707 posts

Gold - King

I think there were to many Box Symbols...  I couldn't read it.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 3:40pm

skater_kid_who_pwns

skater_kid_who_pwns

1,394 posts

Wood - Queen

"The richest man to line the walls?" King said puzzled. "But the only thing that line the walls are these suits of armor." Kailey throw in. "Actually, there is one place, were many men line the walls, the thrown room. Come, follow me." The queen turned and started walking while talking to them all. The looked around then jogged to catch up with her, the thrown room had many kings and queens in it, all in pictures, or sculptures alike.
The queen’s throw was at the end of the hall, next to the kings.  In between however was an odd painting of man with a black suit a cane and a hat, with mountains of gold behind him. “Yes I always knew there was something odd about this picture.” “Look at it, the piles of coins, that he can never reach, and its as if he’s beckoning to use to come in there and have some of it for our self’s.” The queen said in a far off voice.  “Why wait that’s what I say” Brain started to walk towards it with fist raised. “Wait! Don’t forget what it said, but did I see your coming doom, What if it is a trap of some kind?” Kailey yelled. “Everyone back up” it was Malocome speaking He had a vase in his hand. “I am going to throw it through there, and see if there’s something else there.” They all backed up, and he wound up and let it flew, straight through the canvas, and into a room beyond. It landed with a loud Kurplunk. Malcome walked toward the hole, no one spoke. It was big enough to stand in, once you got through the small spot were the picture was. There was a lantern sitting there, with a note “The light will keep the water dwellers away.” “What could that mean” Vox wondered out load “What could survive down there with out care for so long. Unless there...no, there not supposed to exist.” “Vox, what is it?” Brian asked “Not scared are you?” “Shut up, all of you” king said, Kailey was holding his arm, she was scared stiff. Malcome picked up the lamp and started down the stairs nearby. “So Vox, what do you think could be down here?” “Well, there is a legend of creatures of old, half man, half fish” He explained. “So like a mermaid, Right Vox?” “Not quite, they have dark blue skin, with webbed feet and hands, and A face covered in teeth, and a golden plate, that they can see through covers there eyes. They fight with spears, and can live up to billons of years with out food. Now do you understand what I mean Malcome? These things could be the end of us all if we aren’t care full. The rest of the stair case was taken in complete silence, no one seemed to take a breath. Toward the bottom, a large blue creature swam by, the light illuminating only a small bit of the chamber, which seemed massive. There was a small walk way made of wood tied to either side. The treasure and such was on the other side...were the original door would have put them out at. The fish creature was now standing on the path ahead of them, Toward the other side. If the light got to close it would back away, making odd clicking sounds with its mouth. Then, many other sounds of clicking rang out, and sadly it wasn’t an echo, there were more of them, many more. They were coming now just out of the reach of the lamp, all floating, waiting for them to drop the lamp.  “Vox, are you sure they eat people?” Brian asked. “As sure as I am that I don’t” replied Vox. The one that was ahead was now at the end of the bridge, they were getting close. But these creatures were getting closer.....that light didn’t seem to help anymore.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 3:40pm

skater_kid_who_pwns

skater_kid_who_pwns

1,394 posts

Wood - Queen

Hell, how do i get rid of those?

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 8:09pm

flappybob999

flappybob999

639 posts

Wood - Prince

Well, the sentances do not make sense, as they are out of order. Also, there isn't much of a storyline.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 8:54pm

adrecka_33

adrecka_33

137 posts

Wood - Duchess

You can get rid of the symbols by not pastting from "word" what cause it is the programing messes the " and ' those up so that they turn into sybols on here.

   Hope that helps.... A.D

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 9:15pm

eddie13

eddie13

2,390 posts

Wood - King

I think the stories are very intresting.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 9:59pm

skater_kid_who_pwns

skater_kid_who_pwns

1,394 posts

Wood - Queen

Thanks eddie, its good to know someone likes my stroy. And flappy, how is there NOT a story line? And i am never using word again. I was tlaking to peeps and writing this at the same time....never again.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 10:45pm

firetail_madness

firetail_madness

5,903 posts

Gold - King

Getting a lot of attention, eh skater?

 

Posted Sep 7, '08 at 1:35am

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

maybe,when u have completed the story,firetail you might wanna do some grammer,punc,spelling check for him?

 
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