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Posted Sep 5, '08 at 6:24pm

yann510

yann510

31 posts

Wood - Squire

Hi, let me introduce myself. I am a 14 years old boy and I'm on grade 9. I am from Quebec and my main language is french. So when you make a comment, please take this in consideration. :)

Prologue

Damir is an investigator in the murder department. He is working with his best friend, Yakov. They are the best in their job, no killer can escape them. But, on a Sunday morning at 5:07, Damir has been awaked by the phone. An agent has informed him that another murder has happen on the 16 avenue. Damir know that Yakov live on this avenue, but he didn't want to think that he could have been ... killed. He rapidly get his key and enter in his car. He try to start the engine. The motor is doing some weird sounds, but after few minutes he finally hear the characteristic sound *VVVVVVRRROOOUUUMMMMMMMM*. Finaly it started ! Damir said.

So here is the small prologue :) I've decided to write this story, because I wanted to compare me at fire_tail, and I see he is a lot better then me ! ^^

Posted Sep 5, '08 at 8:18pm

shermzx

shermzx

524 posts

Wood - Lord

it's comparing yourself to him.

hoping to see more.

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 9:21am

yann510

yann510

31 posts

Wood - Squire

Lol, as you can see the one with the most AP have more view and replies ^^

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 9:22am

yann510

yann510

31 posts

Wood - Squire

maybe because it's better :)

 

Posted Sep 6, '08 at 9:28am

yann510

yann510

31 posts

Wood - Squire

I think I'll stop here ... I don't have much time with all my *lovely* homework = /

 

Posted Sep 11, '08 at 8:06pm

slipsoccer

slipsoccer

444 posts

Wood - Prince

Lol well your *lovely* homework is all over the place.

 
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