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Posted Oct 5, '08 at 2:28pm

Cenere

Cenere

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Iron - Prince

Zophia poked me to make a thread. I know this will die off quickly, but I guess I could just show off some work in progress, and what I have managed to do by combining MsPaint and GIMP.

The first one is the outline. It is done in MsPaint, since GIMP was acting up.
http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/Unavngivet.gif

The next two is the coloured result, both coloured in GIMP (It was acting okay again)
The difference is the outline. The upper one is with the original outline:
http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/li2.jpg

With this one I copied the outline and blured it. So the original outline is on top, the next layer is blured, and then the colour come:
http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/li.jpg

The last one here is what I will think of as the conclusion. A gradient layer from GIMP, smudged out and adjusted, again with the smudge tool. The lazy solution, I know.
http://i428.photobucket.com/albums/qq1/Cerene_Cerine/li2-1.jpg

Work in progress, right? I do not know if I am going to make it any better.

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 2:41pm

Zophia

Zophia

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Wood - Queen

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The smudge tool is your frrriiieeennnddd...

Kidding aside, the final version is pretty dang awesome. Instant fave if this had been an artsite.
If you want constructive criticism, I could possibly find some. Like the green flameliness being brighter for a better glowing effect, and said glowing effect reflecting down on the shoulder.
But it's awesome.

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 5:25pm

Pazx

Pazx

2,759 posts

Gold - Prince

Awesome! I'm glad you finally made this thread!

hrmmn... The hammer's handle is curved, intentional? And I'd repeat what Zoph said... Body postures no less then awesome... uh... colours are perfect! Awesome... and well... good job! I hope to see more from you!

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 5:47pm

Cenere

Cenere

7,141 posts

Iron - Prince

You should not listen to that, Zophia. It just want to take over your drawing!!
And I think the green light is a bit diffuse..

Pazx, uhm... Actually, yes. Some hammers and axes have curvy handles, giving it more force, when you use it. This might be a little too curvy, but exagerating helps the understanding, right?

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 5:58pm

Zophia

Zophia

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But it is your ffffrrrrriiiiiiiiieeeeeeeeeennnnnnnnnnnnndddddddd~? The smudge tool luvvvvvs youuuu~~~

Diffuse how? The shading on his pants also seem to be a bit off, while you've done very well on the shading of the fur.

Heh, I figured the curvature was just a cartoony interpretation of motion~

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 6:04pm

Cenere

Cenere

7,141 posts

Iron - Prince

Like the turrets that are happy to see you? Oh, there you are BAM ??

I cannot explain it. It is not that glowing, and being somewhat in motion, most of the light go... backwards? And shading is always off.

Just a little more curve, and it will break. So much for heavy hammer head and strong fur.

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 6:08pm

Zophia

Zophia

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Wood - Queen

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X) I will end up smudged out of existence?

Makes sense with the flame then, I think.
But fur shading = well done.

Hehe~ But it does convey the motion quite well.

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 6:11pm

Cenere

Cenere

7,141 posts

Iron - Prince

No, you will be reloaded at the beginning of the test to try again.

Thank you. The only thing I enjoyed, I think.

Why do I have the mental image of the handle snapping and hitting his tail....

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 6:17pm

fst6

fst6

5,761 posts

Gold - King

Awesome!  I like how you show every stage of your drawing! Bravo and want more!

 

Posted Oct 5, '08 at 6:56pm

Cenere

Cenere

7,141 posts

Iron - Prince

I will see if I can get something done.

At the moment I do not think so, but maybe later.

 

Posted Oct 6, '08 at 4:14am

Strop

Strop

7,347 posts

Iron - King

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Lazy background? I think it looks awesome as is.

Also really stoked to note you've ventured into the scary world of RGB! I guess a possible focus would be to investigate shading styles but pfft, whatever!

 
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