This is a children's story I made a few years and its pretty good. Its a spoof book of Star Wars. I'll accept all types of judgement.
Fungi Wars: The beggining A long time ago in a galazy of mushrooms far far away...Zoom! The clashing of the Dark Lord Mushroom's mushsaber against Mushy-Mon-Oni's. "The dark side of the fungi is strong in this one!" the Dark Lord said. "No!" Said Mushy. "Yes!" Said the Dark Lord "No!" "Yes!" "Stop!" Said Mushy! Quickly he jumped on his mushroom beast,Carl,and road off. Later in Mushy's Cabin,Manakin Skyflyer (the local Manakin) was flying. He stopped to see Mushy was (as usual) was crying. "What's wrong?" he asked. "I got my stem kicked!" Mushy wined. "By who?" Manakin asked. "The one with the big helmet!" Mushy cried. "Beepbop!" peeped the local droid,R6-66. "What did he say!?" Manakin asked. "I don't know!!! I don't speak droid!" Mushy screamed.
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R6-66 was actually trying to tell them that there where mosstroopers outside,then all of the sudden the door swung open. Doof! A blast from a mosstroopers moss blaster hit a guy name Fist Double (A dude with a nice ship). "Ouch! Let's go!"he said. "You mean us?" Mushy asked. "Yes,aboard my ship,the Decade Eagle!" Quickly,they flew into space. After the escape,aboard the ship there was a furry donut who was yelling "Blaah! yeaarh! Yaaah!" "Stop!" Mushy said. "That's just Lickataco dancing in the back." Fist said. Boom! An explosion hit the back of the ship and they then were flung on an astriod. There was a dark figure on the astroid,so they followed it. About 5 minutes in the follow they heard blaster fire. They ran to see Queen Mossyolive and her wounded guards. "Who did this?" Mushy asked. "It was the mosstroopers," she replied,"They attacked our ship so we landed here to find nothing but an ambush."
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After rescuing the queen they thought it was all over,but what then didn't know is that the Dark Lord was spying on them. "I feel a presence." Mushy said. Then a little green thing flew in the air and said, "Soda,I am." Then,the Dark Lord came out and threatened Soda. Too bad the Dark Lord didn't know that Soda was a mushroom master and a member of the mushroom council because,before the Dark Lord could say a really big word Soda pulled out a mushsaber and cut off his big toe. "Noooo!" Screamed Mushy. "Wait,he's a bad guy nevermind." And there the Dark Lord lay done for. "Kung-fu Soda knows!" Soda said.
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They left the astriod and went back to the cabin. "Who was that?" "Dark Lord." Soda replied. "The most evil mushroom of all." "Cool...I mean bad!" Fist said. Then Manakin pulled out a dark red mushsaber and cut off Fist's pinky. "I am the Dark Lord's master!" he screamed. "You shall all lose your pinky!" Quickly,R6 shocked him and started the ship and they flew off. "I will cut off your pinky!" Manakin screamed after them.
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After they escaped (again) from evil they ate pretzles,the greatest and most expensive food in the galaxy. Meanwhile,Manakin was at the Dark Castle. "How could I let them escape?!" he screamed. "Maybe you need help" one of his following captians suggested. Manakin was so mad he choked him with his mind. Back in the Decade.... "Blahja ya!" Lickataco screamed. "Mosstroopers!" Fist said. Fist got shot in the leg but Mushy cleared them out. "Close one" fist said. END OF PAGE 5 of 9 ____________________________________________________________________
On the Decade Eagke R6-66 had a hologram. It showed a captured mushroom which said "Mush-Mon-Oni,this is the Mushroom Princess. I have been captured by Manakin,and you are the only one who can save me.I am on the big Mushroom ship. Oh no! I think I hear Mana..." All the rest was static. "There must be more!" Mushy exlaimed. "Well,let's go save us a mushroom!" Fist yelled as they went into hyperspeed. [b]END OF PAGE 6 of 9 ____________________________________________________________________
LMAOOO! made me laugh pretty damn good i feel so dumb though for laughing at that 'childrens' book. i still think you should've made a little bit more violent. haha
