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This is a children's story I made a few years and its pretty good. Its a spoof book of Star Wars. I'll accept all types of judgement.

Fungi Wars: The beggining
A long time ago in a galazy of mushrooms far far away...Zoom! The clashing of the Dark Lord Mushroom's mushsaber against Mushy-Mon-Oni's. "The dark side of the fungi is strong in this one!" the Dark Lord said.
"No!" Said Mushy.
"Yes!" Said the Dark Lord
"No!"
"Yes!"
"Stop!" Said Mushy! Quickly he jumped on his mushroom beast,Carl,and road off.
Later in Mushy's Cabin,Manakin Skyflyer (the local Manakin) was flying. He stopped to see Mushy was (as usual) was crying.
"What's wrong?" he asked.
"I got my stem kicked!" Mushy wined.
"By who?" Manakin asked.
"The one with the big helmet!" Mushy cried.
"Beepbop!" peeped the local droid,R6-66.
"What did he say!?" Manakin asked.
"I don't know!!! I don't speak droid!" Mushy screamed.

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Its not over yet. I will post more tomorrow.

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